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Chapter - 327

🕑 Added 2026-01-20 17:00:06 +0000 UTC

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GHISLAINE DEDOLDIA

why this get 4 chapter and the other get 3........

BGDGr81

TFTC

Matthew Morin

I agree. I thought they had something with the highlights mixed with POV reactions formula. This felt like it dragged a lot in comparison.

A P

I like the more extensive and detailed reaction than usual, but you might want to look through and edit this chapter in particular. Several parts were repeated with only slight differences.

Lilfie

heey, thanks fpr the chapters. The ending part of people coming out of the movie repeated itself, like you wrote two times to see which one you liked better and kept both. Also, that's on me, but 4 chapters for deadpool? Really? The other movies you condensed to write the parts you changed or were important to the plot and how people reacted to them, 90% of the deadpool chapters were literally just a summary of the movie

Halycon404

This section wasn't good. It depends on hitting the humor and mostly it didn't land. The beginning section before the movie worked. The end section after worked. The rest not so much. I guess it's a neat experiment for this story.