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Chapter 56 - The Dark Sculptor

🕑 Added 2024-09-27 22:37:08 +0000 UTC

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Joseph Sikorski

Someone’s excited to finally get their chat. Not ominous at all. “I...have been waitingto meet you.” -> … waiting to … Though that typo did make me think they talked like a surround sound susurrant Gman for a bit.

AnAbsoluteVillain

Villians are what make heros go brrrrrr. Thus each one a treasure, wielded by authors as brittle sticks to be smashed against our hero. While most villians reveal strengths or progress a story. An absolute villian creates a truth so devastating an impact as to reveal an unfixable flaw in hero. A crack that would forever taint them. 🥰 Think like Darth Vader: "luke i am your father" or the jokers "Don't talk like one of them. You're not! Even if you'd like to be... They need you right now, but when they don't, they'll cast you out, like a leper! You see, their morals, their code, it's a bad joke." Only for batman to follow jokers advice and become a wanted criminal.

Abraham Carson

Name fits.

AnAbsoluteVillain

"Just a talk" *break neck.* That my kinda villian.


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