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Chapter 35 - The Meeting

🕑 Added 2024-06-08 00:17:08 +0000 UTC

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Joseph Sikorski

Also-also, I like the callback to the face worms Vince saw on Thal’rin. I wonder if any other such things will come up as the story goes on…

Rabarbra

Typo near the end: "cit." Also surprised dementia is a thing with falians, I'd imagine they'd just catch the Bane since they seem to lack other neurological conditions

Joseph Sikorski

“Sincalindre” is a really satisfying name to say. Kirlon’s remark about Vincent did remind me about a passing thought I had back in Chapter 28, where Thal’rin stated he “can sense an 'otherness' to [Vincent’s] 'nature'”. Tuls didn’t remark on that, though I’m not sure what if anything that means. Anyway, back to here, what a line to end a chapter on. EDIT: Sike, in the marketplace, also didn’t remark on Vince so maybe it’s just that Thal’rin got to take a more considered look at him.


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