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Feedback thread for book 2
🕑 Added 2025-12-05 18:21:48 +0000 UTCSaw another author do this and I think I should do it too. I've had plenty of times where you all have given me feedback and it's improved the readability/flow fairly well.
This is where you tell me what you liked, what you didn't like, what you wish you saw or any questions that popped up that you think I didn't answer well enough. Or anything else that pops up.
I can't promise I'll respond to or answer all of them, what I will promise is that I'll read everything, like I've done with every comment so far.
Comments
Thejasvi Prahlad
I agree with this. Maybe end the book after this entire situation is over?
Eddie
Really enjoy the story, only note would be that chapter 120 shouldn’t be the end of a book. Like if the idea is publish on Amazon or something, it’s the climax of a book but it’s also mid scene.
John Doe
Love the book, don’t love the cliffhangers
