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Chapter 107: It’s Just Raining Power Up’s
🕑 Added 2024-11-16 00:21:05 +0000 UTCDING
Ricky's mind stirred with a jarring echo, his eyes fluttering open in the stillness of midnight.
One eyelid lifted sluggishly, his gaze bleary and unfocused, as if caught between sleep and wakefulness.
His head throbbed, the remnants of hell wine splitting through his skull as it wasn’t unbearable, nothing to die over, but the ache gnawed at his brain.
Groaning softly, he sat up, his gaze dropping downward as the world wavered slightly around him.
Flattened beneath him was Rachael, completely passed out, her hair fanned out of her face like a tangled halo.
Ricky groaned, rubbing his face with one hand before casting a weary glance down at her motionless form.
"Damn, I’m still hard?" Ricky thought groggily, his exhaustion mingling with a flicker of disbelief.
His gaze drifted downward, catching sight of his cock still buried deep within Rachael's folds and with a weary sigh, he began to slowly pull out, his movements careful and deliberate.
A faint, tired moan escaped Rachael's parted lips as his cock slipped free with a soft pop and moments later, his cum followed, spilling out and pooling beneath her in a slow, stream.
"Man, I gotta take a piss." Ricky muttered to himself, rubbing his nose with a tired hand.
But he lingered for a moment, his eyes drifting over the scene before him, a fleeting appreciation flickering through his haze and then, he turned and made his way toward the bathroom.
Spotting the toilet, Ricky glanced down at his persistent erection and frowned, muttering a curse under his breath.
Ricky adjusted into an awkward stance, angling himself as he began to release the floodgates.
As the steady stream hit the bowl, he exhaled in relief, but his reprieve was short-lived.
The dull thrum of notifications tugged at his attention, each chime pounding in rhythm with his lingering headache.
Groaning, his gaze finally drifted up toward the glowing screen, its light adding to the ache behind his eyes.
[Mission Received: Rachael Van Helsing]
Difficulty: Hell
Character Sheet: A
Description: Rachael is a cold and heartless person who in more closed off than anyone you’ve met before, opening her legs could actually be easier then opening her heart as she is that hateful of the world
Objective: Good luck.
Reward: 300,000 IP
Main Mission:
Impregnante Once: 500 Gacha or Rachael Van Helsing Powers
Rewards:
Impregnate Twice:
Rewards: ?????????
Additional Missions:
Have Rachael open her heart and bear her soul to you while in the process of baby making
Rewards: Legendary Coupons x 3 (Complete)
F*ck Rachael into a completely unconscious state
Rewards: Epic Item Coupons x 10 (Complete)
Finish simultaneously with Rachael on her first ever time
Rewards: Legendary Weapon Coupon (Complete)
Bonus Missions:
Cum inside Rachael’s pussy three times in a row
100,000 IP (Complete)
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Permanently alter Rachael’s pussy (Complete)
Rewards: Legendary Weapon Rank Up Coupon
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‘Receive Rachael’s powers and everything that comes with it.’ Ricky motioned his hands, receiving all the coupons and Rachael’s innate powers.
Received:
Legendary Weapon Rank Up Coupon
400,000 IP
Legendary Weapon Coupon
Legendary Coupons x 3:
Epic Item Coupons x 10
Rachael Van Helsing Magical Powers:
+25 Mana
(INNATE) Holy Werewolf Form: This innate magic allows the user to transform into a Holy Werewolf, a magnificent blend of ethereal holiness and primal power. The transformation starts with a blinding white light enveloping the body, searing away impurities and filling the air with a sense of purity. The user's muscles expand, their physique becoming more imposing and powerful.
Warning: The user can only use magic to either strengthen, prolong, or dispel this form.
Ricky's heart pounded violently, a surge of magical energy coursing through him like an overwhelming adrenaline rush.
It burned hot and intense, a sensation that threatened to consume him before gradually ebbing away, leaving his chest heaving.
Ricky's mind remained fixated on the ‘Legendary Weapon Rank-Up Coupon’, a rare treasure capable of elevating any legendary weapon to the unparalleled mythic tier.
Without hesitation, Ricky extended his hand, black flames swirling within his palm before summoning his newly-consumed Solar Flare Bow.
Holding the bow steady, he pressed the coupon against its surface, anticipation crackling in the air like static.
[Error: The Infernal Sun Flare Bow of Eternal Hunger is classified as a skill due to its consumption]
[Error: The Infernal Sun Flare Bow of Eternal Hunger is classified as a skill due to its consumption]
[Error: The Infernal Sun Flare Bow of Eternal Hunger is classified as a skill due to its consumption]
Frustrated by the persistent system notification, Ricky repeated the process twice more to be certain before clicking his tongue in irritation, he dismissed the bow with a sharp gesture.
"That's f*cking gay." Ricky cursed inwardly, staring at the rank-up coupon with a deep frown before exhaling in frustration.
"You know what, who cares? Just upgrade the Legendary Weapon Coupon to a Mythic Coupon." Ricky thought, deciding it was better to leave it up to chance.
Moments later, his golden ticket shimmered, transforming into an ethereal glow that danced like the northern lights.
‘Alright, now open all the tickets and consume Holy Werewolf Form.’
DING
Mythic Weapon: Chastiefol (Mastery: 0%)
Forms and Abilities:
First Form 0%: Spirit Spear - The primary form of Chastiefol is a massive, golden spear. It is incredibly durable and can extend and contract at will, making it perfect for both offense and defense. The spear can also release powerful energy blasts.
Second Form 20%: Guardian - In this form, Chastiefol transforms into a large stuffed bear. The Guardian is extremely durable and can protect its allies by shielding them from attacks or by acting as a powerful melee combatant.
Third Form 40%: Fossilization - Chastiefol can turn into a small, dagger-like weapon that petrifies anything it cuts. This form is useful for immobilizing enemies.
Fourth Form 50%: Sunflower - This form allows Chastiefol to transform into a giant, sunflower-like structure that can shoot out devastating energy beams, capable of destroying multiple targets at once.
Fifth Form 60%: Increase - Chastiefol can split into multiple smaller spears, each of which can attack independently. This form is ideal for overwhelming opponents with a barrage of attacks from various angles.
Sixth Form 70%: Chastiefol can turn into powerful, animated roots that burst from the ground to capture and restrain enemies. These roots can also be used to immobilize large groups or create barriers to control the battlefield.
Seventh Form: Luminosity 80%: This form transforms Chastiefol into a glowing orb that emits a bright light. It can be used to blind enemies or illuminate dark areas.
Eighth Form: Pollen Garden 90%: Chastiefol transforms into a barrier of flowers that can heal King and his allies by emitting restorative pollen. It provides both protection and recovery.
True Spirit Spear Chastiefol 100%: The ultimate form of Chastiefol, combining all its previous forms and unleashing its full power. In this form, it can harness immense magical energy, greatly enhancing King's combat abilities.
(Legendary Item) Legendary Rank Up Coupon: Allows for any item to be ranked up into a Mythic Level.
(Legendary Item) Broken Stand Arrow: If the person has a strong enough mental fighting spirit, they will gain a stand but it will be watered down significantly, if they don't meet the criteria to become a stand user, they will die.
(Legendary Skill) Toxic Immunity: Grants the user complete immunity to all forms of toxins, poisons, and harmful substances at a legendary level. This skill goes beyond simple resistance, rendering the user entirely unaffected by any chemical, biological, or magical toxins classified as legendary. The only exceptions to this immunity are poisons or toxins of god-tier power, which are the sole substances capable of affecting the user.
(Epic Item) Senzu Beans x 10: Senzu Beans are magical beans with extraordinary healing properties. They are small, round beans that can heal injuries, cure illnesses, and restore the consumer's energy completely. One bean is typically enough to heal a person from near-death injuries and restore them to full health.
However, Ricky couldn’t focus or for that matter, he wasn’t even aware of what he received as his body trembled uncontrollably as he slowly sank to the floor, every muscle spasming violently.
[Warning: Vampiric Terror is interrupting the consumption of Holy Werewolf Form.]
[Warning: Both forms are devouring one another for complete dominance-]
[WARNING: FORMS ARE FORCEFULLY MERGING IN THE PURSUIT OF CONSUMPTION-]
[WARNING-]
Cough
Ricky’s body spasmed violently as the first wave of transformation hit, a guttural cough ripping from his throat as a viscous, black blood surged up from his lungs.
His veins, once full of life, began to twist and contort, their once-healthy color draining into an abyssal void.
The darkened blood surged through them, spreading to his face, where his eyes began to change.
They no longer held the faint trace of humanity, but instead, the whites of his eyes turned a sickening, opaque black.
His pupils slithered into the inky abyss, the veins under his skin pulsing with a sickly, otherworldly light as if the very life force in his body was being drawn into the void.
Ricky’s body contorted with unnatural force as his bones began to crack and break, snapping under pressure.
The sound was sickening, like the crumbling of dry wood, yet far more jagged and brutal.
His ribcage shattered, pieces of bone ripping through his skin, only for the flesh to quickly stretch and reform, compensating for the rapid and violent changes.
His spine arched, twisting with a painful crack as it lengthened and thickened, forcing his entire frame to shift into something far larger, more monstrous.
His skin, once soft and human, stretched painfully across his newly reforming body.
With every inch of his body reshaping, patches of dark, coarse fur began to grow, sprouting from beneath the ripped flesh, its blackness mingling with the spreading tendrils of void that wormed under his skin.
His chest heaved as the transformation reached his face, the skin tearing around his mouth as his teeth began to elongate.
His teeth morphed first, then his canines, each one growing sharper, more pointed, until they were the elongated fangs of a vampire, capable of rendering through flesh and bone with ease.
His claws followed, grotesque, jagged talons pushing through his fingers as they thickened and darkened with power.
They gleamed with a black sheen, each one long and capable of tearing through anything in their path.
The transformation didn’t stop there as his muscles swelled, his body warping into a grotesque hybrid of wolf and vampire.
Ricky’s posture hunched over as fur sprouted along his back and arms, thick and wiry, growing into patches of fur that seemed to shimmer unnaturally under the faintest light.
Huff
Huff
Huff
Ricky’s form towered over his previous one, his head touching hte high ceiling as his void black eyes gazed down at the abomnation staring him back in the mirror.
It was only then did the system display the gorutque form that was now added to his arsenal.
Dreadfiend Form: The user undergoes a terrifying and unnatural transformation, the forced consumption of Vampiric Terror had forcibly combined with the user’s Holy Werewolf to realize this nightmarish entity.
Powers and Abilities:
1. Dreadfiend Physique: The user’s body undergoes a horrific transformation each time they shift into this form, their muscles expanding and their form becoming a towering, monstrous version of both a vampire and a werewolf. With this form; their speed, strength, and agility are greatly enhanced, making them a nearly unstoppable force of nature. The user’s senses are heightened to an inhuman degree. They can track prey by scent, hear heartbeats from miles away, and detect the faintest vibrations of life.
2. Blood-Drain Claws & Fangs: The user’s claws and fangs are not only weapons but also tools for survival. Each slash or bite drains life energy from their victim, healing the user and replenishing their strength. This blood-draining process sustains the transformation, allowing it to last longer as the user feeds. Each victim drained gives them greater power and prolongs their monstrous form, but the hunger grows with every passing moment.
3. Corrupted Holy Radiance:This corrupted radiance amplifies the user's physical strength for a short period of time, granting them terrifying force in every strike. The radiance forms a protective aura, bolstering their resilience against dark magic and necromantic forces, yet this holy energy is far from cleansing. Instead, it corrupts all it touches, turning once-pure light into an unsettling, oppressive force that saps the vitality of nearby foes.
4. Predator’s Reflexes & Primal Instincts: The user moves with impossible speed, reacting to incoming threats in an instant. Their reflexes are instinctual, honed by both the vampiric thirst for blood and the feral nature of a werewolf. They can dodge, counter, and outmaneuver most attacks with ease, striking first with an unthinking, predatory hunger that knows no mercy.
5. Sacrificial Aura of Hunger: The user’s very presence brings fear and an insatiable hunger. Anyone in close proximity to the abomination feels an overwhelming sense of dread, their bodies instinctively shying away from the user’s blood-draining aura. This aura also slowly saps the strength of those around them regardless of ally or enemy, feeding the abomination’s powers and making them even more lethal. This aura can be controlled to either heal the user or sap the strength from others, but overuse can leave the user in a weakened state.
Weaknesses:
1. Magic Suppression: While in this Dreadfiend Form, the abomination cannot use magic. All magical powers are suppressed, forcing the user to rely entirely on physical strength and vampiric instincts. No spells, no incantations, just raw, brutal power.
The form before him was far from what could be considered beautiful as Ricky simply stared at his transformed claws, before his body slowly began to revert back to its original shape.
He stood still, caught in a trance, trying to comprehend the monstrosity he had transformed into.
It wasn’t just unsettling, it was something a schizophrenic patient might scrawl in their own blood after a nightmarish vision.
But Ricky’s eyes didn’t flicker with fear but they sharpened, cold determination settling in as he clenched his fist.
There was a clear price to pay for power, and if it meant becoming this abomination, he didn’t mind as more power was worth any cost.
‘Let’s just put that internal crisis to the side, cause I wanna see my stuff.’ Ricky muttered, pushing aside any lingering thoughts about his transformed state.
Ricky refocused, turning his attention to everything he had received, his eyebrow arching in surprise as he examined the results.
Ricky's eyes locked onto his new weapon, his interest piqued and after reading that he could control it with his mind, he was certain it would become an invaluable tool in his arsenal.
‘That’s badass.’ Ricky thought before raising another eyebrow, seeing that he needed to connect with the weapon in order to use all of its ability rather than having it handed to him.
Ricky’s eyes scanned the others, especially the senzu beans, until his eyes always returned to the Broken Stand arrow.
He stared at the broken legendary item in his hands, then glanced over his other possessions.
None of them really needed upgrades, except for his storage, though, even at its current level, it functioned like a warehouse, regardless of whether it was mythic or not.
The thought of having a complete set, however, piqued his curiosity enough to really just throw caution to the wind.
‘Use the coupon to level up the stand arrow.’
DING
(Mythic Item) Stand Arrow: If the person has a strong enough mental fighting spirit, they will gain a complete stand customized to them, if they don't meet the criteria to become a stand user, they will die.
He examined the golden figure closely, its luminescent shine catching the light as he inspected every detail but as he scrutinized the arrow further, his expression shifted into a frown.
‘What do I do with it? Ricky thought, holding the item in his hand, waiting for something to happen but when nothing did, an idea suddenly struck him.
‘Wait, do I like, impale myself with it?’ Ricky thought, tilting his head to the side before opting for the safer, non-suicidal action.
With a quick motion, he nicked his finger, curious to see if that would trigger a reaction.
“Ha~” Ricky exhaled sharply, the breath so cold it caused the mirror in front of him to fog as he fell to his knees as the arrow’s power seeped into his body.
‘Why? Why does it always hurt like a motherf-ARGH!’ Ricky thought, hsi internal words burning through his mind, only for him to cut himself off with a pained, cynical laugh as his head jerked upward suddenly, his focus snapping back into place.
The veins around him pulsed, his body wracked with a pain unlike anything he had ever felt before as it was as though every inch of him was being torn apart.
“It’s like a whole new painful experience, completely different from the others~” Ricky muttered to himself, feeling as though he was trying to pitch a product that was only marginally better than the competition.
It was a weak attempt to stifle his groans with muffled laughter, but it wasn’t working as well as he’d hoped, especially since his face was flushed bright red from the effort.
But just as he was about to collapse, Ricky planted a hand firmly in front of him, a silent declaration that he wasn’t going to succumb to a mere arrow.
‘I killed Dracula, I literally refuse to have ‘killed by a random arrow’ on my goddamn headstone!’ Ricky yelled, hitting his fist into the floor as cracks spiraled out from the impact zone.
DING
(Mythic Stand Skill) Shadow Broker:
Appearance: Shadow Broker takes the form of a sleek, dark figure with an almost business-like attire. Black suit and tie with a long coat that seems to merge into shadows. Its features are sharp and angular, giving it a menacing, yet sophisticated appearance. Its eyes glow with a piercing red light, and it carries an aura of authority and control. The user is also the only one who can see it’s stand unless another being with a stand is born into your world.
Abilities:
1. Negotiation Manipulation - Shadow Broker can influence and manipulate the outcomes of negotiations or deals. By simply being present, it can alter the perceptions and decisions of those involved, subtly guiding them towards outcomes favorable towards the user.
2. Shadow Manipulation - The Stand can control and merge with shadows, allowing it to move undetected and strike from unexpected angles. It can also create shadow constructs for both offense and defense, such as weapons or barriers.
3. Information Extraction - Shadow Broker can extract secrets or hidden information from individuals by touching them or being in close proximity.
4. Subtle Influence - The Stand can subtly influence people's emotions and actions, creating a sense of unease or suspicion in targets, making them more likely to act in ways that benefit the user’s plans.
5. Illusionary Distortion - It can create realistic illusions or distortions out of shadows within the environment, making enemies see or believe things that aren’t true.
6. Temporal Manipulation - At a higher level, Shadow Broker can momentarily distort probability within a localized area, allowing Ricky to manipulate brief moments of luck or avoid immediate danger.
Weaknesses:
Light Sensitivity: Excessive light can weaken Shadow Broker’s shadow manipulation abilities, making it less effective in well-lit environments.
Emotional Disruption: Strong, conflicting emotions from Ricky can interfere with the Stand’s influence and manipulation abilities, making it harder for it to maintain control over targets.
‘What the f*ck-JESUS!’ Ricky rubbed his head before looking to the side, seeing a figure hovering behind him without a face.
The figure’s attire was unmistakably that of a mobster; sharp suit, briefcase in hand, and a hat perched atop its head.
Yet its face was shrouded in darkness, with only two gleaming red eyes piercing through the void.
Ricky watched as the figure’s body seemed to radiate a translucent, black void, an unsettling presence that felt like it was peering into the depths of his soul.
Despite the overwhelming sensation, Ricky couldn’t help but reach out, his hand inching toward the mysterious figure.
‘Raise your right arm.’ Ricky thought, his command clear as the figure obeyed, lifting its right arm, which gripped a briefcase adorned with a gun emblem.
‘This is so freaky.’ Ricky muttered, standing up as he stared at his new skill, which had seemingly manifested into something real as he was a bit taken aback by the suddenness of it all.
Ricky read through the skill’s details, surprised by what it was capable of and tentatively, he poked at it once more, and to his surprise, he could actually touch it now.
‘This is really freaky.’ Ricky thought, looking around for a bit before raising an eyebrow.
‘Get into my shadow.’ Ricky commanded, and the figure obeyed, fading seamlessly into the darkness at his feet.
Ricky stared, surprised by how effortlessly it vanished into the shadow, even though he could only see it, he felt weird to have it just hovering next to him at all times.
‘Now come back out.’
‘Now go back in.’
‘Oh, this is so cool.’ Ricky thought, laughing to himself while commanding the stand to literally appear and disappear.
‘Alright, alright, focus up.’ Ricky told himself, looking back over to the system panel and scrollign through it.
"Now, for the shop," Ricky muttered, rubbing his hands together in anticipation.
‘Come on baby, give me something good.’ Ricky urged the system as he refreshed the shop window, watching as the items appeared before him, ready for the taking.
[SHOP]
IP: 935,000
Refreshable Items:
Wild Scent: 25,000 Impregnation Points
Description: Makes the user’s scent spark wild thoughts within women that they usually tuck away in their subconscious.
Silken Voice: 50,000 Impregnation Points
Description: The user's voice has a mesmerizing quality, making their words feel deeply intimate and persuasive.
Effect: This effect has double the effect of partners of the user who already feel a connection with them which can heighten arousal, create a deep emotional connection, or soothe their partner.
Memory Imprint: 500,000 Impregnation Points
Description: The user can leave a lasting, vivid memory of an intimate encounter, allowing their partner to recall it with intense clarity.
Effect: This makes the experience unforgettable, allowing the memory to bring pleasure long after the moment has passed.
{Refresh Available in 147:56:12}
Daily Item:
Love Tonic: 10,000 Impregnation Points
Description: Get’s anyone who drinks it into the food to get nasty.
Weekly Item:
Aura of Comfort: 50,000 Impregnation Points
Description: The character can emit an aura that makes others feel safe, relaxed, and open to exploration.
Effect: This power is useful for helping their partner feel comfortable and secure, allowing them to fully enjoy the experience.
Monthly Item:
Charming Eyes: 300,000 Impregnation Points
Description: The character's gaze can mesmerize or enchant their partner, creating a deep, almost hypnotic connection.
Effect: This power can draw a partner in, making them more receptive to advances or simply intensifying the connection through eye contact.
Staring at the items before him, Ricky dropped to his knees, the bathroom light casting a radiant glow on the system and its shop as he was left speechless.
For the first time in three years, the shop, the one that had constantly given him trash with only rare exceptions, was offering him gold.
It felt as though skills were raining down from the skies, an overwhelming bounty that he could hardly believe was real.
"Hallelujah." Ricky couldn't believe it but did anyways as in a matter of seconds, he bought everything the shop had to offer, his fingers flying across the screen.
The only item left was the love tonic, still sitting untouched at the shop, all lonely and feeling left out.
DING
Received:
Wild Scent: Makes the user’s scent spark wild thoughts within women that they usually tuck away in their subconscious.
Silken Voice: The user's voice has a mesmerizing quality, making their words feel deeply intimate and persuasive.
Effect: This effect has double the effect of partners of the user who already feel a connection with them which can heighten arousal, create a deep emotional connection, or soothe their partner.
Memory Imprint: The user can leave a lasting, vivid memory of an intimate encounter, allowing their partner to recall it with intense clarity.
Effect: This makes the experience unforgettable, allowing the memory to bring pleasure long after the moment has passed.
Aura of Comfort: The character can emit an aura that makes others feel safe, relaxed, and open to exploration.
Effect: This power is useful for helping their partner feel comfortable and secure, allowing them to fully enjoy the experience.
Charming Eyes: The character's gaze can mesmerize or enchant their partner, creating a deep, almost hypnotic connection.
Effect: This power can draw a partner in, making them more receptive to advances or simply intensifying the connection through eye contact.
‘Jesus Christ, how could anyone not call me a Casanova after this? I mean, come on.’ Ricky glanced at himself in the mirror, almost pleading with his reflection as he made a cross-like gesture, as if blessing all the future mothers out there.
‘Call me fertilizer, 'cause I make that grass grow-no, that's not good.’ Ricky muttered to himself, shaking his head as he dismissed the thought.
‘Call the fertility doctor-wait stop. The fertility doctor, really Ricky?’ Ricky thought looking at his reflection as if it was to blame for these poor one-liners.
‘Man, I really need to get my game together.’ Ricky shook his head, making a mental note to really rehabilitate his pick-up and one-liners for the future.
"Now, let's get back." Ricky walked out of the bathroom and slid back under the covers, spooning up against Rachael as she instinctively smiled, settling into the warmth.
Stroking Rachael’s hair gently, Ricky gradually drifted off to sleep, his sore muscles slowly healing.
As he rested, Shadow Broker remained in the shadows, silently watching over him, guarding its user with unwavering vigilance.
Next morning,
Ricky’s eyes slowly flickered open, his hand instinctively rubbing them as he sat up as he rubbed his nose, letting out a heavy sigh as he took in his surroundings.
SIGH
“And of course you’re gone.” Ricky muttered, shaking his head as he scratched his hair, stray strands falling before he smoothed them back into place.
Instead of waking up to the warmth of a naked woman cuddled at his side, he was met with an empty bed and a single letter resting on the nightstand.
Ricky rolled over to grab the letter, then shifted back to his previous position and with a sigh, he opened it, noticing his name, ‘Ricky’ elegantly inscribed on the front.
Dear Ricky,
I’m sorry but I’m a leaf; the season of my life has changed. Although I’ll cherish everything you, not only did for me, but for my family. I’m tired. Your life is one that will be filled with suspenseful and action-filled ups and downs, I can tell. The way you attract situations is something I never expected, and while I’ve grown to admire your strength and resilience, I find myself longing for a simpler path like what my grandfather always desired.
You’ve always had a way of drawing chaos and challenge into your orbit, and it’s been incredible to witness everything you’ve gone through to get to this very point in your life. Yet, as much as I admire your journey, our journey, I must admit that it’s not a path I can continue to walk with you. My heart tells me that I need to find my own way, away from the whirlwind of your world.
Please understand that this isn’t about anything you did or didn’t do. This is all my fault. It’s about me needing to take a step back and find peace in a quieter place before truly understanding what it is I want out of my life. I hope you can respect my decision and know that my feelings for you and my gratitude will always remain.
I wish you the very best in everything that lay ahead. May you find the strength to navigate your path with the same bravery you’ve always shown.
Take care,
Rachael Van Helsing
Closing the letter, Ricky fell back onto the bed, staring at the ceiling for what felt like an eternity, torn between emotions.
Rachael had always been distant, cold even, and just as she finally began to let her guard down, she was gone.
Ricky hadn’t even had the chance to truly understand her, to get close, because she had always kept him at arm’s length.
And the moment she started to pull him in, she vanished without a trace.
Sigh
"Women." Ricky sighed again, shrugging it off since Rachael seemed responsible enough as he rolled out of bed, quickly tossing on his clothes.
To Ricky, trying to understand a woman's mind was like getting a Rubik's cube with no colors, just gray, and being told to solve it, even though you’re sure it's already fixed but go along with it anyway.
Then, when you think you've cracked it, you spend so much time twisting and turning it that everyone around you thinks it's solved, only for them to find something wrong with it at the last minute.
‘It’s not like this is goodbye, I’ll find her.’ Ricky thought, convinced that with his luck, he'd either run into Rachael again or show up at the random hospital when the kid was born, demanding to see him.
Ricky was more than willing to go with the flow on this one and wasn’t in any rush as he decided to respect her space for the time being, figuring things would work out eventually.
Author's Note: I know its kinda of a short chapter considering the input of the story and dialouge but I just kinda want some feedback related to the stand and the power ups. Like wondering if it's too much cause I kinda wanted to make my own stand and really give it twist that suits Ricky's whole thing since stands really compliment their users. Also what your guy's opinion's on anime type weapons, like is it too far, what do you I wanna know?
Comments
Your Mom
yeah he is in a whole different leauge from when he first left NY
Unknown
tbh i feel like for his time he might be one of the strongest people on earth. but he still gets hard beat by a few mutants and gods that might be roaming around. still though at the rate he’s growing he’ll be able to throw around hulk like he’s a baby by the time he becomes a thing
Unknown
ngl i’d like it if he could put Kings spear through the Elderichafier to see how cool the different forms would be but since he can’t i do still live it as a new weapon for him to use. (i just love the idea of him jumping ppl with a giant buff green stuffed bear) plus i can already see him abusing the pillow just like king tbh. (it would be nice if he could do something to augment it eventually) besides that i personally love the stand you made. i’m always a sucker for mental manipulation, shadow manipulation, and probability manipulation then you go and put all three in one stand? that’s chiefs kiss right there.
Your Mom
in my note I have an idea and I've forshadowed it slightly in eariler chaps but I won't spoil it
Your Mom
thanks and I'm going to make sure to balance it out so it doesn't become dull and I apperciate your trust
Your Mom
damn those are really impactful words but yeah, it will be mentioned espiecally in the next chap is just a little example of what is it come and I'm glad you're enjoying my story
Rolando Mejia
Great chapter as always, I was really hoping he would use the arrow and it happend nice. Now he has a stand that’s invulnerable anything except another stand, I wonder how you’ll exploit or use that. And on the anime weapons, it’s really whatever you feel would add to the story as I believe you would be able to make anything work as you have made an amazing story already
NallukTV
Bueno bueno, que puedo decir, el camino de Ricky hacia la fuerza maxima está pavimentado, aunque no se en que nivel está, creo que para la época debería estar bien, tampoco es que se va a enfrentar a lucifer morningstar o Knull en los siguientes capítulos, construye primero bien tu mundo autor, los poderes que tienen son suficientes por ahora, creo que empezar a pavimentar el camino hacia el imperio mutante debería ser la clave para Ricky, un poco de calidad de vida y amor a sus esposas porque si, para mi todas las que dieron luz deberán ser parte de su vida voluntaria o involuntariamente, esos niños deben saber quien es su padre y que puede hacer su padre, tal ves en un futuro todos sus puedan formar un conglomerado de personas excepcionales en el mundo del negocio político y social, algo como son los Rockefeller pero versión mutante 🫡 estoy orgulloso de esta maravillosa historia, quiero 1000 capítulos hermano!😎 Esta va mucho más allá de solo Marvel es una historia con un potencial tan rico en materia prima que te hace volar la cabeza de lo que puedes crear, recuerda el hogar de todo hombre es su castillo donde la familia forja sus lazos como el acero en el fuego 👍🏻 un abrazo.
Rascal Raccoon
I was stupidly hoping for some prelude to dio memes, but I love the JoJo content regardless
yonsy
It would make sense to create an arc where Ricky gets pulled into another dimension and play off the idea of a time-skip when Ricky returns to Earth, but I'm not sure Ricky's corruption lines up with Marvel, unless that's what you're going for.
yonsy
I feel like it's going to be fun when Ricky meets his kids. to be honest I don't really understand the abilities, there's so much information that I just go with the flow, but it's getting so varied that it's hard to keep track of abilities, although I like the stand the truth is I don't know if it's really necessary, at this point in marvel Ricky doesn't need more strength, in fact with the stand few characters could survive at this point although there is the option to explore the universe that would probably result in Ricky returning to earth many years later, I don't think in Asgard they value his abilities much, it makes more sense that they see him as an abomination
Your Mom
yeah I just thought that it would be cool to get a mythic item, but I don't really plan to make him super overpowered super fast as this was one of those stints but I understand where you're coming from and weil look out for it.
Your Mom
Yeah I think I just got really into the idea but I'll take my foot off the pedal cause ur right in that sense
Aaron Brooks
I like the stand idea
Cat Tip
I enjoyed the stand and its powers. And the anime weapons are getting a bit much, i don’t know what timeline your going off or if your making your own but, at this rate he’s gonna be way to op.
Liam Brady
Please stop corrupting everything, it’s starting to feel a bit dry or overused
