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EXTRA: A venomous flower

🕑 Added 2024-06-24 01:23:21 +0000 UTC

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David

Thank you for the extra Avys PoV! ( In "The twins are arrogant beyond the point of hubris, and if I've of them dies the other will break." [I've] should probably be [one] )

Observer Whimsy

I will also mention i noticed a few spelling errors, notably paths instead of pants and another i cannot remember. Will go back and check later if i have time.

Observer Whimsy

Bravo! I’ve been clamoring for more Avys, and you surely delivered. You really are one of the most incredible authors out there right now, i am so enraptured with this world.


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