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3.30 Forgeigners

🕑 Added 2024-02-05 01:19:23 +0000 UTC

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sarvashaktimaan

I do that with only Irwyn specifically because he is trying to be overly formal. Sometimes with Elizabeth because of the aristocratic background leading to overt politeness even in close company. I try to be deliberate about how characters speak, for better or worse.

Mobious

I'm really enjoying the story, but something has always seemed off about the dialogue; but then I noticed you never use contractions, like "it's" or similar, when people talk. It makes the conversations flow more choppy or overly formal.

Joseph

I realized we have heard, seen and talked about demons from mc’s view and others but not a single mention of angels apart from the chapter of their creation.


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