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Never Too Late to Play: Layovers 5

🕑 Added 2024-12-27 14:00:13 +0000 UTC

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Greg

Compelling journey. Julianna has tasted the forbidden fruit now. Oh the possibilities. The men, the cities, the hotels….no cheap motels for Julianna.’s adventures. How many tentative wives become voracious hotwives once the cherry is popped so to speak. No, I see incredible potential in Julianna and her new friends.

Kevin Goodman

We don't know where this story is going. Will she continue to be a hotwife? Maybe Anthony turns out to be an arrogant prick? Juliana may be one and done.....I'm looking forward to finding out

Bill F Protagoras

With this particular story's beginning I have no doubt he could... After all Rose Bloomed most propitiously and edgily without any call for an alternate ending... to cite only one extremely popular example...

Nick Krueger

I believe Kenny can figure it out if he chose to write an alternate ending.

Bill F Protagoras

Alternate takes ARE fun though, Chris, and also poignant betimes.

Bill F Protagoras

Alternate endings are usually a cop out, lack of conviction, burning a work at both ends. Unless the author has the ingenuity skill and sophistication of John Fowles in his masterpiece of metafiction "The French Lieutenant's Woman." Only Meryl Streep's presence made it a film worthy of comparison to the book.

Bill F Protagoras

underwhelmed... a mere doing of the deed, trope laden after such a superb build up... but mission accomplished. Perhaps the 'reclamation' will lend saving grace to hapless Stephen. As is their wont the spunky cheaters (cheats!) come out of it bright eyed and wearing rose coloured spectacles. No flies on them. Maybe the seasoned author still holds a winning card in his hand. The game isn't over yet.

Nail

I enjoyed this slow burn series and as far as characters go I adore Juliana. Hope this isn't the last we see of her.

Donkatsu

Great story, Ken. They all act like real people For Juliana this is what one would call a good start. I think if this went on Steven would be in real trouble. Juliana is above his pay grade and she has known it for a long time without acting on it until now . . .

D375

This was a good chapter and a solid payoff of the past three books. I think you accomplished your goal of writing an intro to the hotwife lifestyle series. With that said, I prefer stories that are faster paced. I'm hoping that the next project moves back in that direction.

Kenny Wright

Not a bad idea!

Nick Krueger

What can be fun with Patreon is Alternate endings for stories. One happy ending and other possible endings. Granted it does put added work on the writer

Chris K

She should call off the Uber, catch a flight home the next afternoon. She isn't properly fucked yet! "Sorry honey, but this isn't a cheap hourly motel, he paid a lot for this room and I'd feel bad if we wasted it."

reuben james

If this is what you wanted Stephen fine but remember though you may have the emotional connection to Juliana, Anthony will always be # 1 when you're have sex with her, she'll be comparing you to him and you'll be found wanting, it just works that way. You've unwontedly ,made yourself a submissive cockold.

reuben james

reuben james · just now I agree, you just can't put her in these situations and not expect consequences, be careful what you wish for and the reality is not always what you hoped for.

reuben james

I agree, you just can't put her in these situations and not expect consequences, be careful what you wish for and the reality is not always what you hoped for.

Tracey52

Very hot scene

Kenny Wright

No, not a darker story.

Nick Krueger

Loved it, to bad it's not a darker tale. With Juliet and Anthony's chemistry I could easily see Juliet leaving Stephan for Anthony. Oh well


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