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In Too Deep, Epilogue 2

🕑 Added 2024-10-04 19:58:43 +0000 UTC

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Chris K

Good choice!

Kenny Wright

Nevermind. That chapter, after re-reading it, is way too "inside baseball." Most readers will not understand the significance of Todd and AJ there. I'll just insert the very end, with the messages, as an epilogue.

Kenny Wright

I may end up keeping this chapter in place for the novel, now that I'm getting set to publish it. Reason is because of the nod to a sequel. There's no mention of that otherwise.

HWfan

Great writing !!!! Wish it would keep going . Her posing as Raven is amazing

Brad

Great. Can’t wait. Will be a great gift to start 2025.

Kenny Wright

Probably first part of 2025

Brad

Kenny, was wondering when “In too Deep” might be published on Amazon. Looking forward to purchasing and reading again.

Donkatsu

Angelica reappeared in "Bulls Eye" as a stripper in LV. You may recall that at the end of "Girlfriend" just before her slutty stewardess act, she promised to keep in touch with the stripper at the Club. She must have turned the LV week into an annual quest, learning a few of the ropes as a result.

Tracey52

I gone back and started rereading The Girlfriend Experience because it’s been so long. Unless in comes later in the book, I might need some explanation why Angelica is stripping.

Kenny Wright

It’s good to have you here! It was a hard one to write. Very challenging. But I love how the couple turned out. And who knows, maybe Raven isn’t completely back in the box.

Libertyne

I so enjoyed this series, which I just binge read after joining Patreon. The sex, the plot, the relationship stuff, it all hangs together. I love how Amanda through her Raven persona discover she loves wild sex and exhibitionism, and how that all works in the relationship she fakes with Kozlov. And that what drives her to do this is her hard-driving perfectionism, desire to succeed, and lifelong mission to fight crime. Hey, if that makes for a better stripper--whatever it takes! Kenny really nails just how intoxicating and smoking hot she is, particularly when she's being Raven. Truly memorable. And I'll miss Raven, as I imagine many of us panting readers will (and David, and maybe even Amanda herself. They indicate they'll keep playing, but one side of it - the side that struts around at the Gold Club and drives men there wild - will be missing. I'll have to reread the ending. How it all landed was a little murky to me. I was unclear how HIrsch orchestrated everything, who Kozlov thought he was dealing with, Julia's role - to what extent was she in on it? Did she know it was Hirsch? Or just blackmailed into making everything go smoothly? I was also a little unclear how they managed to have the boat wired with fake explosives when Kozlov thought he was using real ones. Nice head fake at the end, when Dave thinks he and Amanda are exposed as a married couple, but it's really Kozlov buying into his pretend marriage with Julia/Gillian from the previous party. He does, however, indicate he knows, at least about Julia, that she's a former FBI agent. You wonder why that wouldn't blow a whistle in his mind, particularly as the drugs are making him more paranoid than usual. As I'm somewhat oblique I sometimes have trouble at the end of intrigue stories, figuring out just who did what and why. Anyway, great job and worth your efforts, Kenny. All your series hold up. This is right up there with Bulls Eye and Training to Love it. I think it's also the best hotwife as stripper treatment I've seen.

Kenny Wright

You went through the whole rollercoaster in about two days! That's pretty intense! Glad you enjoyed it. It was fun reading your play-by-play commentary as you went.

Brad

I am sooooo sad. The fun times are over. It has been a long time since I have gotten this invested in a story. Thank you KW. It was awesome. And I have to say I am in love with Amanda. You rescued her.

Bill F Protagoras

Another oldie but goldie!

Kenny Wright

Thanks so much for this! Made my day.

@hebridesdrifter

Well, we’ll have to agree to disagree about that. Regardless thought the series was great.

Chris K

Not sure about the extreme relationship stress. They had a minor talk about trust. Other than that, he was fine with everything she did. Having there relationship actually on the brink would've made this perfect...

@hebridesdrifter

Such a privilege to have been in on the origins and completion of this marvelous series. “Bullseye” has always been my favorite of your many remarkable books, but I think ITD is now at the top of the list. It’s richer, the characters and plot more complex, than anything you’ve written before. I so appreciate that you involved us and solicited our opinions in helping shape the final outcome. Amanda and David are a richer, more fully realized couple because they weathered extreme relationship stress and became stronger because of it. Several new and fascinating characters emerged in this series and I hope we will see more of them in future editions of this work. Or, perhaps in brand new ones. Thank you, Kenny, for the gift of ITD.

Kenny Wright

She’s the other Heather, from The Girlfriend Experience. Angelica is her call girl/stripper name.

Tracey52

Someone remind me who Angelica is please?

Donkatsu

Kenny, love the story and, of course, Amanda/Raven and David. And how could we not love the return, if ever too briefly, of my fave, Angelica. As a follow up, perhaps Amanda can become a technical consultant to future seasons of "Castaway." Can it really be true that Ty just stripped off and watched, or doesn't he want to let on about whatever history Amanda and he have generated more recently. Tremendous self-control there. If ever you can convince your ACHE crew to create a mashup, I could love to see Amanda (and Dave) in their various personae "deal" with (in no particular order) KT's Reza - undercover work in the Cayman Islands, money laundering; KM's Winston, a tale of social justice and savvy urban real estate speculation, or perhaps Raven decides that it is time, with AJ's help, to corrupt a few more soccer moms a la KM's Hannah; your Paul and Heather - perhaps Paul hires David to take his skills out into the for-profit sector, Amanda and Heather get up to no good; Arnica Butler's Brooke (the private aviation stew), maybe she is on board when Raven goes to Cayman and Raven needs the kind of help Brooke can so ably supply; DS would put both David and TY in cages whilst Amanda has an extended session as Raven; Max could put Raven on tour with one of his Rock and Roll acts, or maybe Amanda could start designing story boards for his marriage consulting firm - have to try things out first, to make sure they work.. That's the thing with great characters and a rich story line; it does not have to ever end.

Rich

And Mia is in Mexico, let's go full Jame's Bond internationa,l private jets and elite Parisian sex clubs. David posing as the pimp to the 1%. .

Rich

Oh yeah. But let's not repeat, this time the bad guy is submissive in his spare time with the hard cuckold fetish and David has to cope with Amanda discovering a taste for pegging and leading guys around on a leash.....literally😆

Bill F Protagoras

An interesting concept. I don't think I've ever seen it done wholeheartedly because it requires a different kind of angst. But the Doc certainly has the strong curved backbone and the ample past experience to carry off the 'protagonism.' And there would be much more potential angles and wild mountin' time "all around the bloomin heather."

Chris K

Manhattan Memoirs...

Z

An even more action-packed and extended fan service next time – v2.1? =)

Kenny Wright

I have ideas. They are one of my favorites, too, and I think Heather is my favorite hotwife I’ve written. Maybe “Cuckquean’s Eye”? lol

Kenny Wright

He may have taken the money, yes. Or maybe someone got there first? Who knows!

Kenny Wright

That’s a fair criticism. I’ll admit that this one’s a bit of fan service. But they’re in LA, so how could I not bring those two in? 😛

Z

Enjoyed the banter between the three amigos – David, Amanda, and Ty – plus the guest mention of Angelica. But the interactions with Todd and AJ felt too short for all of them to jump straight into the sack (who’s Ty hanging out with after kicking off the main course?). Personally, I felt the 'actions' were a bit too short and light compared to the expectations built up for this epilogue.

Rubicon

Okay Paul and Heather those two are still my all time favorite couple in the wright universe, hope there’s a follow up including them in your future.

Bill F Protagoras

I think, Tracey, that's what put the cat amongst the pidgeons, or worse... took the cat out of the bag!

Bill F Protagoras

Didn't dislike it Kenny. Thought it and the previous one was much more polished than the earlier instalments. Comparing those, at times, to un-inked pencil sketches by Jack Kirby... unfinished as yet but containing raw vigour. Liked that you undercut the petty trope by having 'the cuckold' disdain to reclaim his wife like a formality. In general, liked the return to a much more edgy sophisticated tone in this work, but haven't got time to do it much justice right now. I assure you, I have not lost my faith in your skill! It is, as I'm sure you know from personal experience, gutting when technology snacks on your words...

Bill F Protagoras

“Make me yours again?” I pushed the blindfold up so that I could meet her eyes, so large and vibrant, so blue. “Did I ever lose you?” She grinned. “No.” I reached up and unsnapped the cuff on one of her wrists. “Then how about I just fuck you instead.”

Tracey52

Fun and games, but I see why this wouldn’t make the book. A bit maybe corny if I’m honest. Fun though. However, it does segue to what may be upcoming novels, so you’ll have to let the reading public see this somehow. I love that she got a tattoo. Thanks Kenny. Feels like it was for me. I can also see why it can be hidden if she’s maybe staying with the FBI. I am surprised though that in their spirit of openness Amanda still doesn’t know that David knows she had sex with Ty. I’d love to read that conversation and what Amanda does with it. Finally, if I remember correctly Xavier took the money didn’t he?

Kenny Wright

Hm... he'll never get Heather/Manhattan.

quizkid

Can we have a flashback of Angelica being Raven's stripper tutor? 😀

Kenny Wright

I'm not sure how to parse this. I think you didn't like it? To me, it's just more fun and games, but maybe I missed something. (Genuinely curious.)

Bill F Protagoras

What did you both like... now all that remains on my screen are in comparison airy nothings. Bad timing!

Bill F Protagoras

What the fuck just happened? Just when I was going with the flow... thanx for outing reclamation will have to do! Sorry Kenny not my fault! I was waxing all admiring, with reservations Then gone like a puff of smoke!

Chris K

So Kenny. Is it your mission to have AJ fuck every wife in the Wright-verse?

Kenny Wright

Welcome to my life. 😊

Chris K

Lol! I did! Just way too many stories rolling around in my head!

Kenny Wright

You haven’t re-read Castaway Wife yet, I see!

Chris K

Someone remind me who Todd is!!

Amarx1

A sequel that’s set in Spain where they help Javier out with his problem. Strip clubs or even night clubs watching Raven climb the criminal ladder again to catch the bad guys….. defo something to look forward to.

Bill F Protagoras

“Make me yours again?” I pushed the blindfold up so that I could meet her eyes, so large and vibrant, so blue. “Did I ever lose you?” She grinned. “No.” I reached up and unsnapped the cuff on one of her wrists. “Then how about I just fuck you instead.”

Kevin Goodman

That was great, I love how you mixed Todd and AJ on there.


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