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In Too Deep, Book 3, Epilogue 1

🕑 Added 2024-09-27 13:00:53 +0000 UTC

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Brad

No. I would be fine with that. I would like Ty to keep trying. But I also like the idea of the foursome with Mia. Watching Mia and Amanda together would be hot and then let’s start the turmoil again Amanda knows she not to fuck Ty but Mia distracts him and he notices just as Ty cums in Amanda.

Brad

I think it would be wonderful if Raven danced some weekends and was announced as a former FBI agent. How hot would that be seeing an FBI agent as a stripper.

AP

If there is a slutty end can I vote for a final dance at the club…or a work event and getting stuck with Brandon again…maybe to shut him up

Kenny Wright

Love these thoughts, and will definitely make sure to call out the decision to go with it in the final pass.

Rich

Julia’s “We had a general idea of your devotion”. That’s it, that’s the answer to that dip in Book 2. Looking back there was a point where it seemed that David was just letting himself be dragged around and Amanda went straight from “I can’t take it anymore” to plowing back into being Raven with hardly a look back. I mean talk about escalation, she moves in with Nick that evening. Most of where Amanda was is dealt with in Book 3, and I wouldn’t want to change anything that is in Book 2, but what’s missing is David’s motivation for hanging in there and “it turns him on” isn’t really enough. It’s all down to his devotion to Amanda. She’s a real mess when he meets her at the Raven apartment and I think he decides that he’s just not going to let her fail. That’s really his “whatever it takes” moment, sure he gets something out of it, but he’s never comfortable with that. Think I said before, self sacrifice looks passive, but it has an agency, it needs a conscious choice though, otherwise shit just happens and it doesn’t mean as much. Fits with his decision to go again at the end of that book and what he builds to in book 3 too.

Kenny Wright

Check it out, Ben B just started posting a new story on Medium: https://medium.com/@ben.boswell.author/adventurous-olivia-i-the-car-trip-810ab50e6e5b

Z

What’s her “final” body count as of Epilogue 1 actually?

Bill F Protagoras

I would place a bet that Ben is writing something new right now. I'm counting on it... anyroad...

reuben james

I get the feeling the door is not closed for Amanda to do some dancing at a club as she liked that along with all that sexual excitement that brings. maybe take a break but I think she will start to crave it and David too. I know Kenny can make it happen. I've been a faithful follower of his on amazon for years, my go to author.

Rich

There's such a thoroughly great set of supporting characters in this that it could spawn all sorts of things. Ty's pretty much archetypal bull material, with the add on he's got a lot blurrier idea of the law than Amanda had to start with (handy untraceable weapon etc), an unsuspecting hotwife couple could get dragged into something a bit more than they were looking for with him. Julia has a whole load of levels considering her back story and is looking for a husband who can keep up. A casual hook up with her could end up with dodging bullets and all manner of mayhem. Any one see Atomic Blonde? Thats how I see Julia. The challenge isn't coming up with ideas for this lot, it's stopping. 😆

Andrew Mellein

Kenny and Ben are the kings of erotic fiction in my estimation. I wish Ben would write something new.

@hebridesdrifter

In an earlier post I suggested a series could be developed along the lines of a highly eroticized Mr. and Mrs. Smith, but The Harrington Files works along those lines, too.

Rich

I love Ben Boswell very much,he has a unique talent for occasionally driving his literary truck right through your house.. No one's expecting you to go that dark KW. If the Boswell had written this, Hirsch would definitely have been wearing the gimp mask and leather thong, while trying to shoot David. Actually, I can't even imagine what he would have perpetrated with this concept if he hadn't dropped it on you. Was it ticking when he handed it over? 😆

Kenny Wright

I really like this idea of the Harrington Files. I have a good idea for what my second epilogue is going to be, but you’re right, maybe I also think of this one as the first of many.

Rich

Well if we're talking gratuitous filth for Epilogue 2, is it just me that thinks Selena and Amanda and the subject of strap ons was skipped over with unseemly haste in Book 2? Maybe David needs his birthday threesome 😉 tbh there are so many possibilities KW maybe you should drop the title Epilogue 2 and open The Harrington Files episode one and leave room for. occasional shorts like you did with Unconventional.

EPS

For them to hook up! Ty settling down with someone so they could do a swap feels like too big of a change for his character without significant writing to build him to that point.

Tracey52

I thought that too.

Kenny Wright

Good thought!

Kenny Wright

Oh, good point. I’ll smooth that out

Kenny Wright

Yeah, I can’t really do that. This is about as dark as it gets for me. I thought all the drug use and Amanda fucking guys for the case was pretty dark!

Andrew Mellein

Except for the high sex count of Amanda's. I don't think this series was as dark as I thought it was going to be. Nothing like Ben Boswell's "Whatever it Takes" where a wife and mother is kidnapped and forcibly raped by a bunch of goons (and claims to love it!). But for the most part I enjoyed it Kenny and cant wait to see what you have next.

quizkid

so at one point she is on the boat tied up with a ball gag, and then the next she is having Kozlov shove his cock down her throat. Logistically difficult with a ball gag.

Tracey52

Thank you,thank you, thank you Kenny. What a great, great story. One of your best. It’s incredible how you redeemed Amanda in ours eyes, especially as the narrative acknowledges they still have issues to resolve. Your epilogue deftly answered and resolved most of the loose ends and questions I had. I love that they are considering the tattoo. You also answered what happened on the boat and how it all went down. The glaring loose ends for me still is discussing the bareback situation and std risk and the promise to David’s hacker friend. I would also like to know what they get up to. Maybe go on Castaway, loved that mention also.

Tracey52

Amanda definitely wouldn’t do Ty again unless pushed by David. I think one of the loose ends is for David to acknowledge to Amanda that he knows they hooked up even if it doesn’t lead to anything. However, I think it plausible that David says he would like to see them together and Amanda to be fair suggests a foursome with Mia. Good for Amanda too.

Tracey52

I agree. The no condoms thing was not brought up. I think a good place to have brought it up was when Amanda was telling David about the bound dp on the boat. He could say something like “did they use condoms or did they go bareback like Nick did?”

Donkatsu

Great story, Kenny. I vote for more of Amanda/Raven and David. Clearly, they are characters who got to many of us. We like them and want them to live their best lives and have absolutely as much sex with each other and whoever else as is necessary to make each other happy.

Kevin Goodman

Although Amanda did get pretty horny when they watched Mia and Ty fucking. Maybe Jake's idea of some swapping works of they walk in on Ty and Mia, Amanda and David start to play.....

Brian Thornton

Jesus, imagine being the trusted friend and colleague Amanda WON’T bang, when the guys who she WOULD include Kozlov and Brandon “King Douche” Cruise? I mean, it would certainly support the notion that she does not give a flat fuck about Kozlov, because, hey just because she slept with the guy doesn’t mean anything special…uhhh….Right, Ty?

Chris K

Maybe it wouldn't make sense, but David fully supports her on literally anything she wants to do, so I don't see it as crossing a line either. It certainly doesn't seem like anything would cause discomfort in the marriage

Kenny Wright

Agreed.

Smoke

I think you're right, don't see Amanda crossing that line and David's got enough on his plate without his friend fucking his wife again. Sounds like they are trying to get their life back at some new normal level.

Kevin Goodman

It makes no sense for them to hook up.

Kenny Wright

It doesn't make sense for them to hook up? Or not to hook up?

EPS

That doesn’t make sense for the story it would be weird to force it at the point

Kenny Wright

Would everyone hate me if Ty never gets to hook up with Amanda again? As crazy as it sounds considering this story, I don't actually think she'd cross that particular line!

Jake

I think some couple swapping between Mia, Ty, Amanda and David seems to be the most likely Epilogue. I personally hope for David’s company to throw a Christmas party at the boss’s Mansion, a surprise guest shows up, and some very loud bedroom hallways make for some hot discoveries. Oh, and a cliff hanger to the next series🙏

Jake

Great story, Kevin!

Z

Barry Manilow's "Copacabana" was on the local radio a few days ago, and it got me thinking about a scene where David and Amanda visit the Katherine, meet Max and Katie, and one thing leads to another... ending in a perfect happily-ever-after group scene, of course.

D375

This was a clean and solid ending to the story that tied up the loose ends. There are a few things on my mind. I'd like to see David and Amanda in a future series, maybe they go on to buy/manage a strip club. For the erotic ending next week I'd like to see more bondage/dominance play with Amanda and David directly participating. We also haven't paid off the implied good time with Amanda for David's coworker/hacker friend. Lastly, it would be fun to do a swap with Ty and Mia.

Andrew Mellein

She should also get tested for std’s.🤣 But other than that I liked the series and the ending was great.

Kevin Goodman

I see Amanda taking a leave of absence until she figures out what she wants to do. Her and David go on a long vacation to reconnect. While there, they go to a high end strip club as David wants Amanda to see it from the customer side. Someone there offers them some jazz. Amanda and David look at each other like "oh shit"....... And Kenny writes more Amanda and David books

Chris K

What's her body count now? 150?


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