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In Too Deep, Book 3, Part 10

🕑 Added 2024-09-24 15:33:47 +0000 UTC

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Brad

Wow. Loved this. KWs best work yet. I loved the dark side of it. It could also have been darker for me. Loved the drug use because I hate the drug use so much. Gave me a lot of turmoil. Would have loved t see much more descriptions of what effects the Jazz actually had on Julia and Amanda. Would have loved to really see them go over the edge of wantoness for real after taking the drug. Would have loved the turmoil of David seeing that in Amanda’s eyes. That she was lost for a while. Would love more detailed descriptions of the sex. The nastier the better.

Brad

I love the idea of bareback and the riskiness. To take it darker have a scene where Julia or Misty replace Amanda’s birth control pills. She then gets pregnant. That would surely finish David/Amanda if that’s what they were after.

Brad

She ejected the one in the chamber so there were no bullets.

Brad

No never get the tattoo inked. It would signal to the world she is a whore/slut. Much better for her to be the prim, proper, cool individual who is the biggest nastiest slut that no one knows about. It is the uptight lawyer who is always prim and proper that dressed professsionally that is the hottest when she takes it all off and spreads her legs to all.

@hebridesdrifter

Crackin’ good, rip-roarin’, freakin’ fantastic finish! Bad guys ripped asunder by two of the baddest-assed, nastiest and sluttiest women on planet earth. Now . . . about that first video. And Amanda’s real feelings about NICK. And her drug use. And Julia’s designs on David. So MUCH more to unpack . . . it’s gonna be one long Epilogue.

Lambert

Well done! I joined your Patreon specifically to follow this series, and I have not been disappointed!

Tracey52

How’s is bareback not a huge thing? Especially after Sammy’s comments in book 2. David’s got to question how many others and about the disease risk, although it probably turns him on too.

Tracey52

Other things I’d like to find. What exactly went on on the boat between Nick and Raven until Friday night. Also unbeknown to Amanda she owes the tech guy a lap dance. Also what about Ty, Mia, David, Amanda foursome? Perhaps getting the temporary tattoo inked.

Abhinav Rai

Loved it.

Rich

Thinking about the epilogues, the one mystery that keeps nagging at me is around the sending of that first video at the end of Book 1. It's led me down all sorts of rabbit holes 'cos on the face of it, it was a ludicrous risk with a big percentage chance of failing disastrously. Wondering how it came about and how Amanda reacted when she found out Julia had sent it.

Rich

I do think it would have been a nice touch if David had knocked out Kolzov himself, Bit of a waste Amanda unloading his gun otherwise. He doesn't have to suddenly know all the bad assery that he clearly doesn't, just smack the guys head against a bulkhead or something. Then he can have a nice conflicted moment thinking he's killed him (scalp wounds bleed like you wouldn't believe even if they're not serious) before Hirsch looms over him.

Smoke

Wow, great book and a bit of a surprise ending. Leaves a few questions. Julia- she tried to drive a wedge between Amanda and David - is all forgiven. David has to deal with Amanda's apparent close relationship with 'Nicky' and she still lied and didn't tell David everything, can he trust her going forward? Will Amanda need drug rehab from the coke and Jaz? How does David handle work and Brandon? The old Amanda is dead, can David cope with the new Amanda's changed attitude with sex and monogamy? Perhaps some of these will be answered in epilogue.

Rich

If I'm honest, when I first read it, the passing out was just a neat end. Then I did get a moment of "Aw he looks like a wimp in front of Ty and Amanda". But if you're talking about realistic, someone tries to shoot me, less than two minutes after I think I'm about to be executed, while I'm standing in front of a ton of explosives.....gotta say, I think passing out would be the dignified option. Personally, if I'm ever there, I hope I'm wearing brown socks, 'cos if I ain't when I walk in, I will be when I waddle out.

EPS

Oh you… you wouldn’t… incredible

Andrew Mellein

Great closing chapter. Cant wait for the epilogues. And what you have next.

Kenny Wright

Maybe it was all a dream!

EPS

He passes out… it just doesn’t feel right. I get he is a civilian but he’s already been through a lot to just faint it doesn’t feel real. Gun shots inside a ship would be disorienting they are so loud, even experienced shooters would be affected by that, it makes more sense to describe him more a sensory overload. He’s more likely to puke than actually pass out, he’s overcome extremes already to be flattened by some gun shots, he didn’t even get shot! Maybe if he gets grazed or shot and survives it would be better. Hopefully someone will have additional opinions incase im way off. Thanks for the chapters though cool twists!

Rich

Sounds great to me. I'm slightly concerned about how Hirsch disguised himself at the party.....please dont make him the guy in the gimp mask and leather thong.

Kenny Wright

I'd assumed they'd gotten dressed, but being naked is pretty badass, too.

Tracey52

Were Amanda and Julia naked when Ty rocked up to arrest Hirsh? The mental picture of that is great.

Tracey52

So who determined Hirsh was the crook?

Rich

Got to say, all through this, Julia never lied to David at any point. She might have had her less than cuddly moments (OK, that's pretty much all of them) but there's an argument that her hearts in the right place, more or less. She just didn't have a David to bring her back when she went over the edge when she was undercover.

Tracey52

That all makes sense. I got confused when Amanda put a one in the chamber. I thought maybe a blank but where would she have got it from.

Kenny Wright

Oh, and Amanda removed the bullets from his gun, so he couldn't actually kill her husband later. The gun that she shot Hirsch with was Hirsch's own service pistol. I can clarify that.

Kenny Wright

Julia was being blackmailed, just like all of the others. David offered her a way out. I mostly threw the bareback thing in to get a reaction from this group. You all seem so fixated on it, so I thought, why not? :) But yes, it'll be a discussion point in the epilogue.

Tracey52

This was brilliant. So David called Julia and what, turned her around or was she legit the whole time? I need to think on this or maybe someone can explain, looking at you KW. In my defence it is 4 am over here. Koslov bareback in Amanda. I hope there is some discussion of this in the epilogue. You closed things beautifully Kenny and tied up (yes I know) most loose ends.. Couple of typos. Myself or someone will point them out later. Btw what did Amanda do either Koslov’s gun? It was the one he pointed at David yes?

Donkatsu

Wonderful, Kenny! In no particular order: Is a Julia the model on your masthead? Do not threaten Amanda’s man!

Nail

Agree, they both really grew on me as well. Honestly the books lived up to the hype for me, would be interesting to see more going forward.

Rich

Absolutely fucking magnificent. I'll think of something coherent to say later, but well done KW, really, really the best.

Kevin Goodman

Great ending to a great book. I had doubts at first. I didn't like Amanda and I wanted to slap some sense into David. Now they are two of my favorites and this book is in my top three. I know you have a lot of projects lined up, but I would love more from Amanda and David in the future

Nail

Great finale! I suspected Hirsh, Julia I did not. Was a nice touch at the end


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