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In Too Deep, Book 3, Part 8

🕑 Added 2024-09-13 16:54:25 +0000 UTC

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Kenny Wright

I don’t know either. I think it’s from the comments? You all seem to want Ty and Amanda to have hooked up behind David’s back!

Kevin Goodman

For some reason I thought Amanda and David talked about her Fucking Ty. I'm not sure where I got that idea from.

Rich

Exactly my thinking. Sending that first video to David was an insane risk (he could have just blown a fuse and had a confrontation with her at the Gold) unless there was some information that it turned David on and the only person that could have come from was Ty.

Chris K

Amanda didn't tell David. Ty did. He has yet to ask Amanda about it, and she has yet to disclose that. She might be keeping another encounter between her and Ty?

Kevin Goodman

Amanda told David she only fucked Ty once and it was before they started dating. If she fucked him again as Raven and didn't tell David, that's a huge betrayal by both.

Rich

Hirsh called David as soon as he left the bugged apartment. Coincidence or listening in?

Rich

Good points. Does make me wonder (if Amanda fucked Ty) does David already know? With blackmail on the table, not clever to leave secrets that can be leveraged and Amanda is not stupid.

EPS

I think it was a clever and subtle way to show his character has moved over to a level of acceptance

Rich

Oh yeah. This is littered with breadcrumbs to play with. In retrospect Part 6 is the same once you know what happens in Part 7. Brilliantly put together.

Nail

Yeah Chris. I think the coke bit will come to play in the story more. The combination Nick and Coke, is something Amanda has been into way more than she is willing to admit. It is way more than just a "sprinkle". Given her backstory also one that is bringing her personal shame, im sure.

Tracey52

Good be. Good writing by KW obviously.

Rich

Also some of Julia's files are the oldest, so she was the first caught in the net?

Rich

I'm now at the level of suspicion that I was going down the route that if Hirsch isn't in the files, and therefore not a blackmail victim, then just maybe he's running the whole thing David did say he wondered how high this all went.

Kenny Wright

Emojis are a bit ambiguous, which is why they’re great here!

Tracey52

🙏🏻 This emoji wasn’t in their code. Was Amanda just pleading for him to go home or praying that she would remain ok? As you can tell I’m not great with emojis.

Tracey52

Epilogue I think. Must say I was surprised David just offered Raven up.

Tracey52

I was thinking Hirsch’s name didn’t come up in the secret files and who ya gonna call for help?

Donkatsu

Could be why Ty is continually reassuring David that getting turned on by Raven’s antics is entirely normal.

Rich

Really not certain. I don't know what card he'd think he has to play with him, other than just hope he's clean, which is a bit of a leap at this point. How about Julia? He might just be able to gigolo her up now he gets her motivation.

Chris K

Or doing a bunch of coke?

EPS

Hopefully there is a follow up story of Javier collecting his payment from Raven… would be a great way to revisit the story later, maybe a short?

Tracey52

I assume David’s call from work was to Hirsch. Is that how others see it?

Tracey52

Looking forward to what’s on the video. I love the relative subtle things KW puts in, like the raspy voice when Amanda called David when leaving the boat. Makes you think that she had a cock down her throat all night.

Tracey52

When I responded right away, I knew I was in trouble. Shouldn’t it be “When he responded right away”

Nail

"There was one video from the club that predated all others." Fact that Julia hasnt shown it yet, maybe that is indeed the blackmail video for Amanda .

Kenny Wright

Normal. I'll clarify.

Kenny Wright

Thanks.

quizkid

Which phone did Hirsch call David on. the "normal" or the "burner"?

quizkid

He’s made at everyone - I think he is mad at everyone

Chris K

Welcome to the party Mr. Hirsch!

Rich

Well okay. Game on. A Kazakstani and Russian name amoungst the blackmail files. So some of the network are in there because they're being blackmailed. The sort of data that the blackmailers are after is usually things like locations. So someone is using the FBI to help them find where to bug crooks so they can later blackmail them to build a network. Question then is who are they? Is Hirsh involved? And who is behind it all? Javier was kinda hinting another agency I think? And just to get back in the gutter, is the video Javier is going to show David the one where she's fucking Ty? I'm going to miss all of the crazy speculation when this is over.


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