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Castaway Wife, Part 9

🕑 Added 2024-05-24 12:08:11 +0000 UTC

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Miquel Nicolas

Waited until competed and bought… unlike u. I LOVED S1 Survivor… no strategies, no alliances… watched S2 Survivor and didn’t like…. Have not watched full episode since… :). Loved this story. Answered my question with note… no part 2 in works…. Couldn’t think of good plot, but thought maybe u have “outline”. :). The reason I waited was thought was going to be detailed episode and not flash back…. Much better how you wrote story…Hot. :)

Tracey52

Love it

Kenny Wright

Alternatively, the season he is on would have both of them returning, he is there, she gets castaway immediately, but he’s stuck playing the game as she plays back at the resort.

Kenny Wright

Your points here and in the reply are totally valid. Honestly the last few lines I just tossed in at the end to mess with you all! I really don’t intend to write a sequel, but i did consider a general outline. And this is kind of it. Andy goes on there, gets close with the new cast, but then gets castoff almost immediately. Then he’s at Rescue waiting, each day a new player joins him, and there are antics. And maybe Camila feeds him news from home.

Tracey52

More thoughts. Can you imagine if Todd goes out early and has to wait at the resort knowing what’s going on at home. Maybe not so bad if Chelsea gave him a hall pass. Alternatively I’d love for Todd to be the felicity of this series although likely out of character. It’s got my juices flowing for a sequel.

Tracey52

Could be, especially with no context about how long it’s been or what the dynamics are now. It’s a lot to expect Andy to have his head in the game when the implication is that Todd will move in with Chelsea or she goes to LA to be with him. It’s seems too reckless and a stretch. Perhaps more suggestion similar to the hall pass Andy gave Chelsea in the first book might be better. Something like “I don’t mind if you hook up with Todd while I’m away.” On the other hand it’s a great setup for another book, one that could have more about the show and develop the characters and Andy we were requesting. For example it could start some period after the last book where Chelsea encourages Andy to audition. He decides he needs to prepare, buffs up, trains hard maybe even considers a tattoo. Then when he leaves he wonders if Chelsea’s encouragement was to get him out of the way. You could have alternative chapters first on the island then with Chelsea. Andy has Carmilla, Molly. Maybe Carmilla gives some hints to both Andy and Chelsea what’s going on at the island and at home. Todd’s character can be developed. Does he try and steel Chelsea from Andy, does Chelsea consider becoming poly? You get the point.

Kenny Wright

Too much?

Tracey52

Wow, the ending. Leaving Chelsea with Todd for 6 weeks. No way!

Smoke

Very much enjoyed this story, as I have most of your others. I was a bit surprised at the ending with Andy going off for six weeks with no communication with Chelsea. Then leaving her with Todd for the entire time, that is a long time with someone with whom she has feelings. Also Andy had to go through his entire time alone.

Andrew Mellein

Thanks Kenny!

Nail

Thanks for the story! I enjoyed it, I think I am a bit more mixed on the angst than others. It is true that the tension dropped off in LA, but I think that was fine for the couple you wrote this time around. Although I do still think Todd needed a bit more depth to him.


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