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Castaway Wife, Part 6

🕑 Added 2024-05-14 10:59:42 +0000 UTC

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Tim Ross

First of all I want to say that I love your works, you are truly a talented writer. I'm loving this story. I just have one note, though. I prefer a slower, more realistic build-up. The husband has just confessed a fantasy, and must learn to come to terms with it. The wife, after discovering this, must learn to come to terms with this fantasy, with her impulses, and with the potential consequences. I would have liked both of them to have accompanied each other more in their first time. Certainly not an entire night with the lover, without ever writing or checking how the husband is in those moments. It seemed like a forced acceleration to me. My 2 cents!

Andrew Mellein

Yeah, he was.

Chris K

You should read the new GK Grayson book Navy Hotwife. Wife gets out of control, husband doesn't take any shit. Good stuff

Chris K

That ex con was an a hole like no other.

Andrew Mellein

LOL!

Kenny Wright

B Jaye. lol I just got that. And to think I call myself an erotica author.

Tracey52

I also hope the emotional attachment between Todd and Chelsea is explored further in the upcoming chapters. It seemed obvious that Chelsea felt something for Todd as well, but was suppressing it.

Andrew Mellein

Yes! It's by an author I never heard of. But it looks like he hasn't written anything new lately. The ex-con is a total Alpha male criminal but he totally rocks the prim and proper wife.

Kenny Wright

I’ll check it out. Is it on Amazon?

Kenny Wright

Some time in June.

Rubicon

Yeah I noticed Todd doesn’t seem to have much depth to him so far

Kevin Goodman

Great stuff as usual. I'm really looking forward to the rest. I'm hoping we get Camila and Kim involved. Would Chelsea have a problem with Andy and Camila?

Nail

Really been enjoying this story. I've said it before, but I am happy for both Andy and Chelsea on how their story progressed. I do think there is more to Todd though, I think he really did fall for Chelsea and is just going with the flow now.

Andrew Mellein

Kenny I read a great erotic story called Cheater by B Jaye. It reminded me of Annie’s Affair. The wife is banging the ex-con next door neighbor so the husband installs surveillance to spy and get revenge. I liked it.

Kenny Wright

Thanks for your feedback, as always, Tracy. Yeah, Andy's not really a reluctant cuckold here (he did tell her to go and pretend to be single), but I can see how that impacts some of the drama. It's something to consider for future work, though. I don't often write a totally reluctant hotwife husband, so it would be an interesting experiment at the very least.

Kenny Wright

I love this, too.

Andrew Mellein

I always love when the hubby is excluded like when Andy is outside the room but can hear Chels moans when she is getting it from Todd. Kenny have you written a Hotwife story where the hubby in that situation freaks out (maybe he is reluctantly allowing his wife to play) and the wife is getting it better from the lover. But he hesitantly allows her to continue to see the bull ( she is infatuated) but he is increasingly turned off to the situation but does it for the wife? It gets to the point where he doesn’t speak to the wife. I like hotwife stories where sometimes the husband is not always down for the situation but gets pulled along. Great chapter!

Tracey52

Thanks for writing that kw. I enjoyed it a lot although I perhaps didn’t relate or feel for these characters as much as some of your others. Andy having the hotwife kink as well as and inferiority complex when it came to Chelsea reduced the angst factor a bit much to feel to much for him. He was cool with it which reduced the drama a bit. If Chelsea had cheated or if he was a more reluctant cuckold then maybe it would have been more dramatic as a read. Having said this, you’re a great writer and it was a five star read. You could leave it where it is, this is a good place and we can imagine what the next few days hold. If you do proceed then it needs to add to the drama not just describe further encounters between Todd and Chelsea with Andy watching. Perhaps if Chelsea seemed to become the insatiable slut and Andy really thought that some long term arrangement might be put in place or if Andy’s liaison develops and we read Chelsea’s reaction,then that would be worth reading. I’m sure you’d make it great.

Z

Can't wait to read more of the the "new" Chels playing catch up with all the other cast members after missing out the watch parties~ Kenny - Do you have an expected date of publishing the book?


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