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Castaway Wife, Part 4

🕑 Added 2024-05-07 12:37:19 +0000 UTC

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Tracey52

Thanks so much for engaging in this discussion. I figured your reasoning would be along those lines and are valid reasons. Don’t be too afraid of reader backlash as I think there is an appetite for it. Look at kt’s Devil in the Waters.

Andrew Mellein

I love it!🤣🤣

Kenny Wright

I mean, how can I write a character like her in and NOT use her in a scene, right? In my head, she resembles Jess O'Reilly, host of Playboy's Swing (and other things).

Andrew Mellein

Is anyone going to mention that I think it’s hilarious that the host Molly is getting railed in this chapter🤣🤣🤣 Didn’t Jeff Probst of Survivor hook up with one of his contestants? Maybe it is true life🤣🤣

Andrew Mellein

I think you should too Kenny! Your previous book Annie’s Affair was one of the best in the cheating genre!

Kenny Wright

But seeing this feedback, as well as some of the others, both here and in the community, has me thinking that I should write a book that does involve cheating, and seeing where that takes the characters.

Kenny Wright

Thank you so much, and I don't mind criticism as long as it's constructive (even though, as you say, this isn't really criticism). I did consider having he go all the way in that moment, but didn't for a couple of reasons. The first is because I worried how it would paint Chelsea to the readers (even though human desire usually wins there). The second was a matter of pacing. For me, that ultimate crossing of the line is a pivotal moment, so I didn't want to do that so early. That said, (spoiler alert) she does cross the line, and there's still a bunch of story after.

Tracey52

Like the others have said you KW and KT are a cut above the other erotic writers. You tend to be at the more HEA end and so I’m not surprised that Chelsea didn’t go all the way, which I think was a shame. I think most people in her shoes wouldn’t have stopped and with Andy virtually if not actually giving her a hall pass, human desire would have won out. I know some would then want you to go down the burn the bitch path because her behaviour could have been seen as cheating but then again not. It may have made for a more interesting path to the HEA ending with more the work through. Don’t take this as a criticism but hopefully an opportunity for further discussion. I love to read your thoughts Kenny about whether you considered this and if so why you chose the story arc you did.

Nail

Great chapter! Anxious to see how far Chelsea went, and in the end glad it went the way it did. I must say you and KT Morrison are the only ones so far who, for me personally, made the chapter release work. Just the right amount of build up and timing of the releases.

Andrew Mellein

Yes, thank you! I recently bought all your paperback books on Amazon that were issued. There is still a bunch I would love to get my hands on. I like yours Ben’s, Kirstens’s and KT’s writings. I love the angst and getting worried when it looks like a marriage is falling apart.

Kenny Wright

I also like those types of books/stories, pushing things to the brink before pulling back. It's not a card that I can play with every book, though, or it loses its edge. And yes, going forward, I'll put these out as paperback. I think I've figure that out. And I may go back and release the last couple in paperback if you're interested.

Andrew Mellein

Great chapter Kenny! Glad Chelsea didn’t fully cheat on Andy. I knew Andy would be down with the Hotwife scenario. I would like a scenario where the hubby wasn’t totally onboard with the hotwife lifestyle but the wife was. Maybe cheating was involved. I love erotica where the couples are on the verge of ending things but then realize they love each other. That’s why I like your book “Friends with Benefits” But still love this series. Can’t wait for the undercover cop/stripper book you have coming out! That seems right up my alley! Do you have any plans to release more of your books in paperback format? I love having these things on my bookshelf!

Kenny Wright

Real life kitchen floor sex isn't always the most glamorous. Also, I wouldn't suggest it. It's not pretty under there!

Kevin Goodman

Great stuff, but I suddenly feel the need to check the baseboards under my kitchen cabinets.


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