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Data & Magic Chapter 97: Denied and Dismissed
🕑 Added 2025-05-16 11:17:23 +0000 UTCWilliam allowed himself a flicker of optimism as Caspian concluded his impassioned plea. The prince had hit all the key data points: imminent threat, shared danger, mutual benefit, even a nod to Merindel’s mercantile interests. The logic felt sound, the presentation compelling. If this were a funding pitch, William thought, based on the projected ROI of 'not being overrun by undead and goblins', I'd approve the initial seed round.
His human assessment, however, crashed headfirst into the monolithic wall of elven tradition and perceived superiority.
High Elder Syltharil, the ancient nexus of power on the dais, didn't grace Caspian with a direct reply. His expression remained utterly impassive, the pale blue eyes holding the chill of glacial ice. He didn't refute the arguments, didn't question the intelligence. He simply, dismissively, turned his gaze towards Elder Talyndor beside him. It was a power move executed with chilling precision, a silent declaration that the human prince's words were beneath his direct consideration. Okay. Initial response protocol: Delegate rebuttal to subordinate. Establishes hierarchy, minimizes direct engagement with petitioner. Standard C-suite tactic.
Talyndor straightened almost imperceptibly, accepting the cue. His voice, when he spoke, was smooth as polished river stone, but carried an undertone of condescension sharp enough to draw blood. “Firstly,” he began, his gaze sweeping briefly over the human delegation before settling somewhere above their heads, “we acknowledge the effort expended by the representatives of Aver in bringing this… information… to our attention.” The pause before 'information' dripped with scepticism. “While we appreciate the… gesture…”, another loaded pause, “...rest assured, Lumenar's own vigilance is constant. Our patrols would undoubtedly detect any significant goblin encroachment long before it posed a meaningful threat. Our borders are not so porous as human lands, perhaps.” He inclined his head slightly. “But thank you, nonetheless, for your diligence.” The words were formally correct, yet felt like being patted on the head while being shown the door. Dismissal wrapped in politeness. Classic.
He allowed the silence to stretch, amplifying the dismissal, before continuing. “Secondly,” Talyndor's voice hardened fractionally, “you appear to labour under a misconception regarding Lumenar's capabilities. You speak of this 'Dark Legion', this rabble of goblins and shambling corpses, as if it represents an existential threat.” A faint, humourless smile touched his lips. “Perhaps your kingdom struggles against such foes. Lumenar does not. Our defences, woven with magic ancient before your kingdom was even founded, our warriors, whose skill is honed over centuries not mere decades, represent a bulwark you cannot comprehend.” He leaned forward slightly, emphasizing the next word. “Superiority, Prince Caspian, is not mere boast. It is a quantifiable reality.”
He then turned pointedly to Rynarion, shifting the focus, putting their own Warden on the spot. “Rynarion. You lead our border patrols. You know the wards, the terrain, the strength of our warriors. Answer plainly. Is there any realistic possibility, however remote, that this undisciplined goblin army, even led by one of Neverus's brutish commanders, could breach the true defences of Lumenar?”
William saw Rynarion’s jaw tighten almost imperceptibly. A political minefield opened at his feet. Lie and betray his duty? Or tell the nuanced truth and risk Syltharil's wrath while undermining the urgency of the human plea? Rynarion hesitated only a fraction of a second, his gaze flicking briefly towards the anxious human faces, a silent apology, before locking onto Talyndor's expectant stare.
“No, Elder Talyndor,” Rynarion stated, his voice carefully neutral, each word chosen with surgical precision. “The goblin army, as reported, lacks the means to overcome Lumenar's primary defenses directly. The approaches are shielded by layers of illusion, powerful wards, and terrain designed to confound and delay. Our patrols would intercept and neutralize any significant force long before it reached the heartwood.” Careful phrasing, William noted. Focuses on 'primary defences’ and 'direct breach', leaves room for other threat vectors.
Rynarion continued, injecting a careful note of caution. “However,” he added, subtly pushing back, “a sustained campaign, even by goblins, could tax our resources. If they were to find a way to disrupt or bypass the outer wards...” Ah, the 'unknown unknowns' caveat. “...the situation would become more… demanding. Elven skill ensures high combat effectiveness per warrior, but attrition is a factor against sheer numbers. With the support of our mages maintaining the wards and providing offensive capability,” he glanced towards Elunara, “we would undoubtedly prevail. But casualties would be inevitable. And Neverus… is persistent.” He met Talyndor’s gaze again, letting the implication hang. “This is why I still counsel considering the Averian proposal. A swift, decisive, joint offensive may prevent a longer, costlier defensive war.”
Before Talyndor could respond, High Elder Syltharil’s voice cut through the chamber, sharp and cold as a shard of ice. “Rynarion,” he snapped, the reprimand undisguised. “Your assessment of defensive capabilities was requested. Your strategic opinions were not. Confine your remarks to your designated function.”
Rynarion flinched visibly this time, bowing his head in submission. “Forgive me, High Elder.” The public rebuke was brutal, silencing any further attempt at nuance from the Warden.
Syltharil turned his icy gaze back to the delegation, his expression utterly dismissive. “As you have heard,” he declared, his voice resonating with finality, “Lumenar faces no credible threat from this goblin horde. Our magic is potent, our defences absolute. We require no… assistance… from outsiders whose own kingdoms are clearly struggling.”
He deliberately shifted his gaze to Elunara. “Elder Elunara? As leader of our esteemed Mage Circle, surely you concur? Lumenar's magic is sufficient?”
Elunara met Syltharil's challenging stare, her green eyes flashing. “Our magic is powerful, High Elder,” she responded, her voice clear, ringing with conviction. “But wisdom lies not only in power, but in its judicious application. To face a foe who commands legions of undead, who twists life itself, and to rely solely on defence, solely on our own isolated strength… is strategically unwise. It invites a war of attrition we may win, but at a cost far greater than collaboration.” She leaned forward slightly. “Ignoring potential allies, refusing shared knowledge in the face of such a threat? That is not strength, High Elder. It is hubris.”
Syltharil’s lips curled into a faint sneer. “Sentimentality, Elunara. Predictable. You have always been too eager to look beyond our borders, too quick to forget the lessons of the past.” He waved a dismissive, bejewelled hand. “We are elves. Inheritors of millennia, wielders of deep magic. We do not need aid from short-lived, desperate humans. We endure. Alone.”
Elunara drew back as if struck, biting her lip, frustration and anger warring with the ingrained respect for the High Elder's position. She subsided into silence, casting a single look of profound apology towards the Averian delegation. Ally suppressed. Political manoeuvre complete.
Syltharil turned his cold, final gaze upon the humans. “Representatives of Aver,” he announced, his voice devoid of any warmth, utterly final. “We acknowledge your journey. We have heard your plea. Lumenar requires no alliance.” He rose slowly to his feet, a frail figure radiating immense, unyielding power. “This audience is concluded. You are dismissed.”
The words echoed in the vast chamber, each syllable a hammer blow crushing their desperate hopes. Dismissed. Rejected. The mission, the frantic journey, the risk, the pleas, all for nothing. William felt a cold hollowness spread through his chest. He saw Caspian sway, his face ashen. Julia’s hands were clenched into fists at her sides, her expression a mask of controlled fury and despair. Roland stood rigid, absorbing the insult with military discipline, but William saw the muscle jump in his clenched jaw. Jett remained impassive, but his eyes were narrowed, flinty.
As if to rub salt into the wound, EMMA blinked with a notification, which William quickly checked.
New Title Awarded: [Denied and Dismissed]!
Effect: -10% familiarity with elves aligned with High Elder Syltharil
It was the first time William had seen such a negative title being awarded, and to top it off, it came with a negative benefit as well. Well this is turning out to be a sh!t day! Luckily not invested in any stocks, otherwise it would be a sea of red like the dot com crash…
William Shard - Character Sheet
Level: 6
XP: 3000 / 10000
Titles:
[Owner of a Dragon’s Source] – Effect: +20% mana regeneration rate. Additional abilities detected but error! Unable to process! Error being isolated to avoid harming user!
[First Contact with the Elusive Elves] - Effect: +5% mana regeneration rate
[Denied and Dismissed] - Effect: -10% familiarity with elves aligned with High Elder Syltharil
NOTE – For older titles, refer to character sheet in Chapter 87
Class: Magic Analyst
Stats:
Strength: 18
Agility: 20
Magical Power: 31
Vitality: 20
HP: 200
Mana: 165 (mana regen +30%)
Unallocated Stat Points: 9
Skills:
Swordsmanship: Basic
Magic (Conventional): Basic
EMMA System: Basic
Language (Averian Common): Basic
Healing / Regeneration: Basic, Enhanced when near death
Equipment:
Longsword +2
Wyvern Light Armour +2
Ice Dragon Crystal (Integrated)
Companion:
Snowy – Ice Dragonet
They had failed. Utterly. Turned away by ancient pride and wilful blindness. The fate of Aver, and perhaps even Lumenar itself, felt suddenly, terrifyingly precarious, balanced on the edge of an abyss the elves refused to see. Decision Analysis: Failure. Root Cause: Confirmation bias, entrenched ideology, failure to adapt to new threat data. William stared at the impassive Elders, the stunning architecture suddenly feeling cold and alien. Recommendation: Find new stakeholders. Or prepare for system collapse. They were utterly adrift.
