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Outline - Thief In The Mind
🕑 Added 2018-06-20 08:00:36 +0000 UTCThis is the original working outline that I used to create the Thief In The Mind story stories, the first chapter of which can be found here: http://www.spiralsnightclub.com/2018/03/thief-in-mind-part-1.html
(Please note the final stories varied drastically from the version in the outline, but this was the basics of what I worked off of while I was writing.) (also spoilers)
Thief of the Mind Outline (working title)
Hypnotists journal entry monday
- Talks about finding a woman at a fancy ball
- Notices her necklace very expensive
- Asks her to dance
- Uses the dance to hypnotize her.
- Takes her off necklace in the dance. She is too dazed to notice.
- Slips away from the dance floor leaving her hypnotized and dancing.
- Ends journal entry with a comment about how lovely it was to see her show up at his hotel room.
N.C.P.D. case file Wednesday
- Opens like a police file, complaint filed by an insurance company
- Details how a necklace insured by a visiting heiress went missing
- Describes video of the dancing. The man whispering into her ear.
- There was not clear view of the necklace being removed, it was just there one minute then gone the next.
- Details how the main video was accidentally destroyed. No evidence.
- Suspects the unknown man may have actually hypnotized the heiress
- Interview do detail her being remarkably quiet that night when she is usually loud.
Part 2 (in theory)
Hypnotists journal entry Saturday
- Describes going to field museum.
- Finds a young woman who works there (Katheryn maybe?)
- Escorts her into the hall of gems to ask her a question
- Uses the gems to hypnotize her
- Carefully escorts her off camera and steals a kiss
- Describes how lovely it was to see her come in later.
- Describes how she was excited like a school girl to be there dressed sexy
- Bag of gems with her.
N.C.P.D. Case File Monday Morning.
- Report of missing gems from the hall of gems in the Field museum
- Describes going to museum and looking over the location, security footage erased.
- Details who could have actually had access
- Interviews a few people
- Notices katheryn remembers only a normal day.
- Story doesn’t line up with others.
- On a hunch has katheryn undergo hypnotic regression
- Memory is sanitized, hypnotic block in place.
- First evidence of hypnosis.
Part 3 (in theory)
Hypnotists Journal Entry Thursday
- Describes chance meeting with beautiful woman
- Has a very beautiful Ring on her finger large sparkly
- Flirts with her, holds her hand
- Directs her attention to the ring.
- Hypnotizes her with her ring.
- Sides the ring off.
- Suggests she joins him.
- They are quite the pair.
- Make love in a picture booth
- Ends with a knock at the door.
N.C.P.D. Case File Monday morning
- Starts with “We got him!”
- Describes how the girls boyfriend who gave her the ring reported it missing
- Interviews with the girl details that she doesn’t remember ever having a ring
- Boyfriend is angry but officer is able to calm him down and explain
- Hypnotist hypnotizes the girl and again discovers a mental block.
- Goes to zoo to investigate, looks for security footage, nothing
- On a hunch tries photo booth records finds picture of the hypnotist
- “We got him!”
Part 4 (In theory)
N.C.P.D. Case File Monday evening.
- Details the case so far, the three women
- Details how they found them
- Details going to apartment to interrogate individual
- Depressed about dead lead
- Person has been sick all week
- Has doctor notes detailing it
- And evidence of not leaving
- Even had a witness to prove his statement.
- Case remains open.
Hypnotists Journal Tuesday morning
- Explains officer coming in
- Showing him the evidence
- He has no alibi no witnesses no excuse
- Office smiles and says he is under arrest
- Takes out her hand cuffs and handcuffs herself behind her back
- Confused as to what's going on.
- Threatens to beat him as she kneels down in front of him
- He removes her hat
- Then her gun belt
- Then her badge
- Shows her her badge and hypnotizes her with it.
- Comments that hypnotizing a police woman is always step one in a new city… always.
Part 5(potential bonus?)
N.C.P.D. case file two weeks previous
- Details small fight at a nightclub
- Describes how a hypnotist at the club helped to calm the people down
- Describes how with the new spirals night club going up things will get weirder
- Also details that the hypnotist asked her out
- Describes “the arrogance to ask an officer out while she is on duty”
- Details how she turned him down.
Hypnotists Journal same day
- Describes how he was hopping clubs to get the lay of the land, find the rich spots
- Fight breaks out, doesn't care till female office shows up
- Gets into the fight and hypnotizes the people there.
- Uses hypnotic phrasing to work the cop into a light trance
- Asks her out,
- She accepts
- Takes her to a table that he tells her is very expensive restaurant
- Orders cheese sticks that she believes is steak
- Uses her badge to hypnotize her.
- Ends up in apartment.
- Officer leaves.
- Ends with “hypnotizing a police woman is always step one in a new city… always.”
