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Demon Princess: Chapter 5: First Base

🕑 Added 2025-08-26 14:27:28 +0000 UTC

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Trytan

I can totally relate to this. I love a “real” magic system, and things like classes and levels should also blend smoothly into a real world. After all, we’re not in a game, even if it’s a LitRPG. I guess it’s a little bit teased in the first five chapters: I plan for the skills she uses to be more of a support, helping her adapt to this world. The inhabitants, like the cultists, also use “skills” she knows, but not as abilities you can just activate whenever you want. Instead, they’re more like learned skills, such as driving a car: you have the muscle memory, but you’re still consciously using it. Spells work the same way; you know the mechanics, but you still need to deliberately shape the mana into that spell every single time.

The Time walrus

Very interested to see where this goes. I hope it has a darker tone than other fiction I've seen in this niche, not that I want it to be grimdark or anything. But I always have a problem with fiction that portrays people in positions of power without also acknowledging the almost inevitable harm that even the most morally correct decisions can cause when they directly affect hundreds of thousands of people. I do really appreciate that magic, at least mostly so far, isn't just clicking mental buttons but is actually felt and practiced. I much prefer having the knowledge and muscle memory forcibly injected into Lily's head than having her just press skills as if this were a game. Hopefully, Lily isn't just levels and stats. Getting to top 1000 in a popular game is a genuine accomplishment and takes a massive amount of time, skill and knowledge. So, Lily should™ have the skills to back up her levels, at least after an adjustment period. I always lose interest in these sorts of stories if the only thing the protagonist is good at is having a big stat sheet.


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