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The Fusionist Book 4 -- Chapter 10

🕑 Added 2023-10-20 18:51:06 +0000 UTC

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Jonathan Brooks

I think you're right! Thank you so much :)

“The man, Alwhin, stopped his advance and looked disgustingly at the Innkeeper before turning greedy eyes back on Larek. “ I think you mean disgusted (adj) here? Unless Alwhin’s appearance is what is disgusting and not that his expression is disgusted?

Jonathan Brooks

I'll go back and check that -- thank you so much!

Zed

is it 25 or 35 the jump from 25 to 40 in the story there seems weird and i think i recall it being over 30 before


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