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The Fusionist Book 3 -- Chapter 14

🕑 Added 2023-08-30 21:29:25 +0000 UTC

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Jonathan Brooks

I can definitely see that; this beginning part is a bit slow as he finally gets a chance to experiment and learn some things. I'll see about speeding it up a little on my revisions. There is definitely going to be some action coming within the next few chapters, so hopefully the pacing will be a little better!

James Thomas

I really enjoy the story but the pace is so slow. It's fine but a slightly faster pace would be helpful I think.


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