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The Fusionist Book 2 -- Chapter 51

🕑 Added 2023-06-11 17:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Jonathan Brooks

I agree; Larek just doesn't quite think that way quite yet, though :)

Steve

I can understand the nightmare s because of what he was forced to do... but not the regret. Would rather kill scum like that, than enemy soldier that is just doing what they are ordered to do.

Jonathan Brooks

You could be right -- I'll see about getting that done a different way :)

Caleb Reusser

Last sentence feels like it is breaking the fourth wall. I think the chapter would end better without the last paragraph and just start the next chapter with the beginning of the final paragraph and going into the event.


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