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The Fusionist Book 2 -- Chapter 36

🕑 Added 2023-05-31 17:30:01 +0000 UTC

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Jonathan Brooks

I can look into trying to make this less of a stretch when I do my editing for publishing in September for its October release

LitLeveler

The whole healing fusion thing feels like a stretch. They can't really prove he made them and he can say he was taught and then change his pattern slightly or even fix the issue that the old ones have. It feels like a force plot device. Like it will be used to escalate a situation and cause something to happen eventhough it takes way too many just and assumptions. I guess they can verify "truth" so that's a thing to worry about but I really real that pushing any of that is a stretch for a feoup of people losing a battle and lives regularly.

MagicWafflez

... welp, that's unnecessarily harsh


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