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The Fusionist Book 2 -- Chapter 28

🕑 Added 2023-05-24 21:32:01 +0000 UTC

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I’m getting a bad feeling we’re about to lose Shinpai soon because he’s being too helpful… The reaction to stama gives me a bit of hope he’ll be fine though.

James Boyles

but why are they around the others?” Larek asked. Correct to: but why aren't they around the others?” Larek asked. In the end, however, he decided Correct to: In the end, he decided “No, no other questions.” I'm confused on this placement. I'd just add it to the next paragraph with the addition of, "Stated the Grandmaster Fusionist as he stared at him... I'm disappointed that Shinpai didn't point Larek in a direction instead of giving the stink eye. Otherwise fun. Next chapter please.


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