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The Fusionist Book 2 -- Chapter 15

🕑 Added 2023-04-24 16:04:35 +0000 UTC

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Jonathan Brooks

Thank you! I may have to play with him taking off his other boosts to see what would happen :)

James Boyles

Looks like you went comma happy in this chapter. But they didn’t act like that, though, Discusion: I don't know if you wanted the thought to stop at "that" or "though". So the correction I'd recommend is either delete the comma after 'that' or delete the 'though,'. I know that, Larek, but Correction: delete the comma after 'that' No, you’re not a monster, either, but it’s the Correct to: No, you’re not a monster either, but it’s the but it helped, nonetheless. Correct to: but it helped nonetheless. neither Verne nor Norde knew, either. “I’ve never heard of anyone having both before, at least. Correct to: neither Verne nor Norde knew either. “At least I’ve never heard of anyone having both before. Needless to say, I know, but I Correct to: Needless to say, but I but surprised him, nonetheless Correct to: but surprised him nonetheless I always thought it was true, however.” Correct to: I always thought it was true.” Whyit worked that way, Correct to: Why it worked that way, Interesting read. I'm curious what would happen if he took his mage boosting fusions off and attempted to boost his body. I wonder if the 'stress' on his 'body' would lessen and he'd recover faster.


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