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The Fusionist Book 2 -- Chapter 18

🕑 Added 2023-04-30 21:55:09 +0000 UTC

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Jonathan Brooks

Don't feel bad! I really appreciate what you're doing to help make it better :)

James Boyles

I feel bad that it seems like all I do is nit pick the chapters since no one else is doing it. I liked the web docs where it doesn't feel like airing dirty laundry.

Jonathan Brooks

Thank you so much!

James Boyles

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