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Let's Discuss: I Need Your Honest Feedback
🕑 Added 2025-11-05 19:00:23 +0000 UTCHey everyone,
I've read all your feedback on Chapters 187-190, and I want to have an honest conversation about Eileen and the direction of Arthur's personal life.
Since there’s already some pushback here, I’m a bit worried about how it might be received on WebNovel too. I can easily fix this now before it goes there, but I need to know what you actually want.
What I Was Trying to Do:
I wanted to show Arthur's growth into a more complete person - someone who found peace and family. I thought introducing Eileen after a time skip would be a quick way to do this without turning the story into a romance novel. I wanted to keep focusing on the action and MCU plot while still giving Arthur emotional stakes and development.
To be honest, I didn't think the female lead mattered that much. She was mainly there to make Arthur a dad so I could write fun scenes with Elena.
What I'm Hearing From You:
The introduction felt sudden and like a shortcut (which, yeah, it kind of was on purpose to avoid the story turning into a romance novel).
There were already characters like Carol or Ariadne with more build-up and chemistry.
Eileen hasn’t had much to do so far, which makes some readers feel like she’s just a homemaker and nothing more.
So I’m a little stuck — and I need your help choosing the best direction.
Options:
Keep everything as is - Easy for me, but if you're not enjoying it, what's the point?
No female lead at all - Arthur stays single, just adopts Wanda and Pietro as his found family.
Single dad Arthur with Elena - Maybe her mother died in childbirth, or he created her using alien tech. Plus Wanda and Pietro.
Rewrite with Carol - Use the chemistry that's already there. She can still be a cosmic hero while having a family.
Rewrite with Ariadne - Honestly, I don't think this fits well, but I'm listing it since some mentioned her.
Delay the romance - Remove Eileen for now and develop romance slowly and naturally during future MCU events. No Elena for now, just the twins.
Keep the story but fix the format - Keep Eileen, Elena, and everything else, but add chapters to show the 9 years chronologically in a quick speed-run format instead of flashbacks and storytelling.
Your ideas - If you have something better, I'm all ears.
The main MCU story will continue no matter what we choose. I just want to write something we all enjoy.
We’ve built this together, and your thoughts mean a lot to me.
So, which option do you think is best?
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