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PDF Alex's heel woes (Part 90 to 99)
🕑 Added 2024-07-05 15:31:00 +0000 UTCComments
rocky jockey
Nice Feedback Terry!
terry gene
One item that will deeply help the story. In most these types of stories, we don't get the Reason for the antagonism. We know she's a little bitch with a sweet face. However, why? Could we have a couple of slides showing the back story? The more explanation the better. If possible, showing her facial expressions/hand motions while she recalls the event/events that cause her deep antagonism would help Every reader. Cheers!
terry gene
you're doing great.
rocky jockey
Please check again, just updated
terry gene
92 missing, 91 repeated. sorry
