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Cataclysm Conquest | Chapter 04: Heavy is the Crown (First Draft)

🕑 Added 2026-02-02 21:24:53 +0000 UTC

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4 Governors 24 Senators 384 Wardens Yeah okay I majorly fucked up the math LOL

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Conscription is definitely a good idea. Conscription binds the population together, reduces discrimination, and provides a very large pool of trained manpower. But, it's particular important in most LitRPG settings; people *need* XP in order to gain stats. People with stats are far, far more useful to society - they have better health, can work harder, live longer, can better focus, etc. Regarding the numbers in the Commons... I think I'm misunderstanding them. "The organization of the Commons was relatively simple: the City had been carved into Quarters, Blocs, and Wards, each with a democratically elected representative. Each Quarter in the city had 6 Blocs, with 16 Wards per Bloc, for a total of 80 representatives in the House of Commons." So each Quarter has 80 representatives in the Commons. It doesn't say "will have". Are there multiple quarters? I would assume 4, although I can only remember the Prosperity Quarter and the Residential Quarter. So, at least 160 representatives in the Commons, maybe 320 representatives. "The seats on both sides had been intentionally built to match, with ten seats per row, per quadrant, sectioned into four neat quadrants, creating a total capacity of one hundred on each side, with two quadrants belonging to each the Nobles and the Commons." So there's currently only enough space for 100 representatives for the Commons, right? But there if there are 160 or 320 representatives... Or is this just a case of lots of slots not being filled yet?

Dominick Ruiz

Tftc!

Hannibal Forge

I did! Thank you.

Thafres

Good chapter as usual! In the second paragraph “his sister answered immediately, drawing a sigh from his parents, an amused smile from Kairi, and a thoughtful hum from Synthra.” I think you meant an amused smile from Aylar

Mr Exar Kun

Tftc! Conscription is definitely a good idea especially when city defence is required, most citizens will be trained to defend thier homes.

Ser_Slothicus

Hell yeah, thanks for the chapter!

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!


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