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Cataclysm War | Chapter 102: What Lies Beyond (First Draft)

🕑 Added 2026-02-01 02:29:44 +0000 UTC
Cataclysm War | Chapter 102: What Lies Beyond (First Draft)

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Redsennin94

Love the Coat of Arms!!!

Redsennin94

TFTC! Congratulations to the finished book! It's been amazing. Two points who maybe need some work in my opinion! You hyped up the grandparents in like 3 or 4 chapters only to: Hi Grandpa, thanks for coming to save me. I'm fine thats why i slaughtered half your army. I will not explain anything, now go home and pay reperations to me." It felt very unsatisfying. And second the third FORCED/COERCED Harem member. Aylar seems to be pretty pushy first with their wedding, then with Xarina. I can understand if someone(grandparents)where to think Ace got coerced in all of it. I get that Ceruviel pushed him to be king because it was necessary. Everything else feels a little forced.

Eric

I love the line "I will be your worst fucking nightmare." and wish that it could be the last line.

Quentin Cozzi

Another great ending to a book!

Ser_Slothicus

Aiyoo!!! Let’s gooo! Thank you for the book.

Dominick Ruiz

Or should I say, tftb

Dominick Ruiz

Tftc!

Mr Exar Kun

Yay! More dungeons! Looking forward to the next book! Thanks mr Rocket Man! I hope we see one of those monsters too, with kai's ambition, it would be a wild story.

scrombles

Woot so good read the last 3 chapters back to back solid read did feel a little disjointed with the mentor chapter but over all good stuff.

Kory Smith

Thank you for all the chapters. Maybe go get some sleep? We’ll still be here when you have more

Bryn

Congrats on finishing the book!

Alex Mangum

Phenomenal. Great as always. Ready for book 3 :)

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter! Congrats on making to the end of book two!!!!🎉🎉🎉


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