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Cataclysm War | Chapter 101: To the Future (First Draft)

🕑 Added 2026-02-01 01:06:07 +0000 UTC

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Kaywye

Well written, and very entertaining, I especially liked the Tsundere attitude from Xarina...she starts as she means to continue. I also noticed the sentences that J Snyder pointed out, and was trying to rework the sentences to work gramatically, but failed...so I figured unless I had something better to suggest, I should just keep my mouth shut.

Drake_Soul

"God help me, he thought hysterically, I’m totally screwed." I'm pretty sure that's the plan Ace

Hannibal Forge

Good catches.

J Snyder

‘The idea of Leonidas talked had been her idea, though he still hated it.’ ‘Ceruviel smiled showed teeth when she gave it at her introduction.’ These two sentences don’t seem to flow correctly.

Quentin Cozzi

Great chapter, though I have been noticing your use of Diaphanous has been quite overused I would say, it’s been popping up multiple time a chapter whenever you are describing the clothing the girls are wearing.

Mr Exar Kun

Tftc, she will be a wild addition to his house hahaha

Dominick Ruiz

Tftc !

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!


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