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Cataclysm Conquest | Chapter 15: Atomic Physician (First Draft)
🕑 Added 2026-02-06 01:02:27 +0000 UTC
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BW13307
Great to see his character repurposed, I thought he would be a great antagonist with the book 1 chapters though I understand why he was removed and fits so much better in book 3 when Leonidas is more established.
Dominick Ruiz
Tftc
Hannibal Forge
It was supposed to be a tongue-in-cheek Khan-being-Khan moment, but I can remove it easily. Thanks for being honest!
J Snyder
Ok, some criticism here and you can obviously take it or leave it; the line about โactual illegal aliensโ feels ham-fisted and completely ruins immersion into the story. ๐คทโโ๏ธ
Hannibal Forge
Same!
Mister Majick Man
Tbf up to the point he starts burning them alive he has some *semblance* of sense but that gets absolutely (ironically enough) decimated by both action and behaviour.
Mr Exar Kun
Tftc, ahhh good ol kahn.
Kory Smith
For his voice, I hear Miguel Ferrer from the 1998 Mulan (he voiced Shan Yu, the Mongolian leader)
Bryn
Thanks for the chapter!
Quentin Cozzi
Thanks for the chapter!
Alex Mangum
Okay, so this dude is literally insane. Another person who thinks they are gods gift to mankind. Thanks for the chapter.
Ramb0Jo3
Thanks for the chapter!
