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Cataclysm War | Chapter 96: The Price of Hubris (First Draft)

🕑 Added 2026-01-31 06:35:00 +0000 UTC

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Rodrick Dusio

As for the star hold army, I consider them zealots, less regard for their own lives. Putting up with bigger amount of dead their makes perfect sense. suspension of disbelief and all that there is fine.

Rodrick Dusio

I don't think any of the events or the order of things need to change when I say this. The numbers vs the reaction isn't mathing to me. I know, fastasy land, could be fantasy numbers but even pops wasn't making a huge deal at the percent his army had been devastated. Historically, to route an army you only need to kill like 3-10% of a force and above that it was considered a slaughter of epic proportions. Like write it in all the books kinda epic. There was a line from Pops that went like, well I've only lost like half of x force. HALF, why isn't he freaking his shit?? As the guy who's applying conventional logic, he's seems quite lackadaisical about the numbers there. Achellie's reaction kinda tracks. The war he went through seems to have been nightmare fuel. This won't stop me continuing the novel or some nonsense but its been really bothering me. I don't think that just cause people have powers they would want to live any less. Artur inner thoughts bother me but it was also boggling my mind seeing the regular human army just charging positions en mass without big reactions to the things happening. And having Arthur be the look into the human side was very under reactiony to me.

Hannibal Forge

If he kept them around, someone would try to kill them or worse, and he knows that.

Eric

Nice end of that particular fight.

Redsennin94

Tftc! So he just sends them home without explaining anything?

Kaywye

Nicely done. Leonidas comported himself as a King and not as a grandson, while still showing mercy to his family members, however misguided. I have a feeling, however, that this isnt the end. Artur seems able to accept things as they are, but Gwendolyn doesn't look like she will. She's grieving right now, but her hate seems to run deep, and that will lead her astray.

Durabler

Banger again, tyftc

Bryn

Kinda funny he has Mordred in his name! Thanks for the chapter!

Mr Exar Kun

That was fucking brutal. But I guess he is right, that is the price of not having reliable or substantial intel.

scrombles

Or maybe hostages till reparations are finished.

scrombles

While I'm loving this the two hours and leave thing counters the 10 platinum for every lost citizen thing you would think that they would at least leave a representative to work out the details of the war reparations.

Alex Mangum

Another banger of a chapter. Satisfying, yet kinda sad.

Ser_Slothicus

Damn I’m eatin these chapter up. This is top notch


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