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Cataclysm War | Chapter 91: An Impossible Choice (First Draft)

🕑 Added 2026-01-29 23:35:11 +0000 UTC

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LiquidDew

goddamn, I like John and Sonya, but they are actually painfully naive. it makes sense that they don't figure out her true allegiance but surely their mentors would have taught them how important secrecy of the whole lie detection thing is. it is so much more useful when people don't know you have it. and honestly this shouldn't need to be taught, it should be almost self evident after thinking about the ability for a few seconds. John and Sonya are supposed to be teens, no? with how they act in this chapter I would guess that they're like 10. to be clear the broad strokes are fine! just the fact that they both basically said "she can tell if you tell the truth btw" in the first exchange absolutely blew my mind.

Durabler

Tyftc

why doineedto

There was a passage early in the story, where Achilles was reflecting on his grandfather's xenophobia and concluded that he would sef justify any atrocity behind self-righteous ideations. He might be telling himself that he's rescuing his grandson, but if he sees him fighting for and leading the enemy force he could just as easily keep attacking under the idea that his grandson is being brainwashed, or any number of other excuses.

Redsennin94

Tftc! Sorry i know the humans are the,,bad guys" but not one came to the idea that that the iron duke is here to safe his grandson?! When he met ceruviel He made her promise to reach out to his family. Did not happen. They did not invite his grandparents to the wedding or let them know that He is fine. Sorry in my eyes it is there own fault for not thinking about it. Plothole!!!

Kaywye

I will hope that Ace and Gramps will meet soon, and that they can work this out with a minimum of bloodshed. Also, Xarina needs to hold on desperately to that instinct for honesty, otherwise things will go very badly for her.

Mr Exar Kun

Tftc more!

scrombles

Holy shit this is picking up let's goooo! Also my strategy for xarnia still seems to be in play

Ser_Slothicus

Damn this has been an excellent day for Cataclysm war! Thank you for the chapter

Hannibal Forge

Thanks for all the feedback, Bryn!

Dominick Ruiz

Tftc!

Bryn

Well named chapter, lots of nice juicy dilemmas in this one, thanks for the chapter!

Hannibal Forge

Would love your thoughts on this!

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!


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