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Chapter 27: The Bubbling Hot Spring Alibi! Sake, Sweat, and a Shocking Confession!
🕑 Added 2025-11-10 01:33:54 +0000 UTCThe Konoha inn designated for the Suna delegation was imposing, with a clean, dark wood facade and Suna guards at the door.
Naruto stopped across the street, half-hidden behind a vegetable stall.
"Alright. Plan in motion," he whispered to himself, giving himself a loud slap on the cheeks to focus. The sting centered him for a second.
He straightened up, trying to look official. I'm the Chūnin liaison. I'm responsible. I'm... diplomatic. A cool diplomat.
He reviewed the lie one last time in a low voice. "Hello, Suna sirs! Ambassador Temari-sama is in a meeting! A wellness meeting! At the Onsen! With Shizune-sama! Don't bother them! Please! And goodbye!"
Naruto frowned. "No. 'Please' sounds weak. 'They are not to be disturbed'! Yeah, that's it! That sounds like an order! It sounds like Temari said it!"
He brushed off his jacket. I'm the Ambassador's assistant. I have authority. Or at least, I have the authority to repeat what she said. This will go fine. It's a simple lie. There's no way this can go wrong.
He took a deep breath, held it, and crossed the street, walking with a forced confidence he absolutely did not feel. He felt the uneven cobblestones under his sandals.
The two Suna guards, posted on either side of the imposing entrance, were enormous. They were at least a head taller than him and looked like they were carved from the desert rock itself. Their faces were impassive under their dark turbans, and their practical, sand-colored Suna uniforms looked out of place in the green of Konoha.
As Naruto approached, their gazes fixed on him.
Naruto swallowed and raised a hand, forcing a smile that pulled at his cheeks.
"Hey! Good morning! Beautiful day in Konoha, huh!"
Silence.
The guard on the left had a thick scar crossing his chin. The one on the right had eyes that looked like obsidian chips.
Naruto lowered his hand, his smile faltering. "Okay. Uh... I'm Naruto Uzumaki! The Konoha liaison for the exams! And Ambassador Temari-sama's assistant! I'm sure she's told you about me! No? Maybe? The cool blond guy?"
The silence grew heavier.
Finally, the scarred one spoke, his voice deep and gravelly.
"The Ambassador is missing."
It wasn't a question, but a statement; a statement of a very dangerous fact.
Panic shot through Naruto's chest, but he crushed it with a shrill laugh. "No! No! Haha! That's the good part! That's the funny thing! She's not missing! She's... found! Totally found!"
Naruto thumped his chest with his thumb. "And I found her! Or well, she found me! Because we're coworkers! And we get along great! Trust me! So I have a message! From her! Directly!"
The second guard, the one on the right with the obsidian eyes, narrowed his gaze. His voice was sharper, more cutting. "A message. From her?"
"And how is it," the scarred one continued, taking a half-step forward, "that you, a Konoha Chūnin, have a message from our Ambassador, when her own personal escort hasn't had contact in hours?"
"Ah! Good question! Very logical!" Naruto said, waving his hands frantically. "It's because... uh... I was on my way to a very important meeting about the exams! And she intercepted me! Yeah! And she gave me the message! Because... I was closer! Efficiency!"
"Efficiency," the scarred one repeated. He didn't sound convinced.
"And what," said the one on the right, "is this message so urgent that she couldn't deliver it to her own people?"
"This!" Naruto puffed up with pride, feeling like he was finally getting to the easy part. He snapped to attention, gave a somewhat clumsy military salute, and shouted:
"Ambassador Temari-sama is in a diplomatic wellness meeting at the South Onsen with Shizune-sama!"
The guards looked at each other.
The scarred one tilted his head. "A... meeting...?"
The one on the right finished the sentence: "...diplomatic... wellness?"
"Yeah! Wellness!" Naruto exclaimed, nodding vigorously. "Lots of wellness! You know! Stress! They were super stressed about the exam logistics! The ink, the forms, the schedules! A disaster! So they went to relax! Diplomatically!"
"To the Onsen?" said the one on the right.
"The best one in the village! The South one! I highly recommend it!"
"And," said the scarred one, his eyes emotionless, "was there anything else in this message?"
"Oh! Yeah! The most important part!" Naruto leaned forward, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial whisper that could probably be heard across the street. "She told me to tell you these exact words...!"
He paused dramatically.
"'They are not to be disturbed'!"
The silence that followed was total: not a bird, not the wind. Just Naruto, grinning like a maniac, his arm still in the air.
Slowly, the scarred guard looked at the guard on the right. The one on the right looked at the scarred one. They exchanged a look Naruto couldn't decipher.
Then, they both looked at Naruto.
"I see," said the scarred one.
"Understood," said the one on the right.
Naruto let out the breath he didn't know he was holding, his body slumping in relief. "Great! Fantastic! I knew you'd get it! You guys are super professional! Mission accomplished! I'm leaving! I've got Chūnin stuff to do! Bye!"
He turned, ready to sprint.
"Wait."
The word, spoken by the scarred guard, stopped Naruto cold. He froze, one foot in the air.
He turned around slowly. "Yeah? What... what's up? Did you not hear me? I said don't disturb them! It was a direct order from the Ambassador!"
"We heard you, Uzumaki," said the guard on the right, and for the first time, he moved, taking a step to the side to flank him. The scarred one stepped forward, blocking his exit.
Naruto was now between them.
"But it's... interesting," the one on the right continued.
"What's interesting?" Naruto asked, his panic starting to bubble up again, this time with a sour taste.
"That Ambassador Temari-sama had a meeting scheduled with the Konoha council at nine," said the scarred one, his voice low and methodical.
"A meeting she requested herself," added the one on the right.
"A meeting she didn't show up for."
"And that, suddenly," said the scarred one, leaning in a little, "her new Konoha 'assistant'..."
"...shows up here, sweating and yelling a story about a 'wellness bath'..."
"...and gives us a direct order to 'not disturb' that sounds suspiciously like a veiled threat."
All the color drained from Naruto's face. "No! No! It's not a threat! It's... it's... a polite request! From her! To you! So you don't bother her while she's... relaxing!"
"Really?" The scarred guard leaned in closer, invading Naruto's personal space. "And why is a Konoha Chūnin acting as our Ambassador's personal messenger to tell us to back off?"
"Because... because... she trusts me!" Naruto yelled, his voice cracking.
"Or," said the guard on the right, his hand casually moving toward the hilt of the weapon on his hip, "is it because you have her?"
Naruto felt the ground disappear beneath his feet. He gaped.
"WHAT?! No! I don't have her! You're crazy! She's at the Onsen! With Shizune! They're relaxing!"
"Sounds convenient," said the scarred one. "A perfect excuse. 'Relaxing'."
"Or maybe," said the one on the right, his hand now resting on the weapon, "you, the infamous troublemaker of Konoha, decided to 'kidnap' our Ambassador to... who knows what? To sabotage the exams? To get concessions from Suna?"
"KIDNAP?!" Naruto's shriek was so high-pitched that a bird flew out of a nearby tree. "Are you insane?! I didn't kidnap her! I'm her friend! I saved her life! I saved her village! Ask Gaara!"
"Mentioning the Kazekage isn't going to help you," the scarred one said. His tone became deadly serious. "You've evaded our questions. Your story is ridiculous. And you're here, while she's missing."
"SHE'S NOT MISSING!"
"Enough," said the scarred guard. His hand was now firmly on his weapon. "You're coming with us, Uzumaki. You're going to be interrogated."
"No! I can't be interrogated!" Naruto's panic was total. If they interrogate me, everything will come out. The basement. The Rasengan. The pajamas. The dress. The war! "I... I have to... get back to work! I have to clean!"
"You'll be cleaning a cell if you don't come now!"
The guard on the right lunged, his large hand reaching out to grab Naruto's arm.
Naruto's panic exploded. Training, instinct, and pure terror took over.
"YOU CAN'T CATCH ME!"
"What?!"
"I have to go! I have an appointment! With the dentist! SMOKE BOMB!"
Naruto slammed a small sphere onto the ground, which he had kept in his pocket just in case "The Archivist" attacked again in the basement. He had prepared it for a cleaning emergency, but this counted as a much, much worse emergency.
POOF!
Thick, gray smoke filled the elegant inn lobby. It was high-quality smoke, spicy and dense.
"WHAT THE HELL?!"
"Cough! Cough! The smell! It's... pepper!"
"He's getting away!"
"ALARM!" the scarred guard roared through the smoke, his eyes watering. "The Uzumaki has attacked! He's confirmed the kidnapping! Get him! Notify Suna! Notify the Kazekage!"
"I DIDN'T KIDNAP HER, YOU BUNCH OF IDIOTS!" Naruto's voice sounded from the street, already distant and laced with hysteria. "SHE'S AT THE ONSEEEEEEN! ASK SHIZUNE!"
"He's lying! It's a diversion!" yelled the one on the right. "Lock down the village!"
Naruto ran across the rooftops, his heart beating a thousand times a minute, pumping pure terror through his veins. He leaped from a blue-tiled roof to a wooden one, his feet barely grazing the surfaces.
"Crap, crap, crap! It went wrong! It went really, really, really wrong! Now Suna thinks I'm a kidnapper terrorist! An international terrorist!"
He hyperventilated, gulping in air as he jumped a six-meter gap between buildings.
"Gaara's gonna kill me! He's gonna kill me, execute me with a Sand Burial, and then he's gonna let Hiashi execute what's left of me for ruining diplomatic relations!"
He landed in a narrow alley, sliding down the wall until he was a trembling ball next to some trash cans.
"I have to hide! I have to find Shizune! No! If they see me with Shizune, they'll confirm she's my accomplice! I have to find Sakura-chan! She fixes things! She's smart! She'll hit me and then she'll fix things! Sakura-chaaaaan!"
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Meanwhile, on the other side of the village, the South Onsen was peaceful. Steam rose lazily in the cool morning air, filtering through the bamboo stalks.
I can't relax.
Shizune was sitting on the edge of the hot spring, the water barely covering her knees. She had her bath towel wrapped so tightly it was a miracle she could breathe. Her knuckles were white where she gripped the towel.
I feel like the ANBU are watching us from those bamboos. Definitely. Or maybe the Suna guards. Or the Hyūga. Oh, my god!
Temari, already submerged up to her neck in the steaming water, sighed. The heat was the only good thing that had happened to her in the last twelve hours.
"Of course they're watching us if you keep acting like a fugitive," Temari said, her voice calm but sharp. "You're sitting there looking terrified. Stop shaking. You're ruining the alibi."
"I can't help it!" Shizune hissed, her voice a sharp whisper. "I left Genma unconscious in a hallway! Unconscious! What if he wakes up? What if he has amnesia? Or... or... brain damage? I'm a medical-nin! I'm supposed to prevent brain damage, not cause it! I broke my oath!"
"He'll be fine," Temari said, rolling her eyes. She leaned back against the smooth rock. "It was a light hit. Probably. Besides, he's a Konoha Jōnin. I'm sure he's taken worse."
"It wasn't light!" Shizune insisted, looking horrified by the memory. "I used chakra! I panicked! I heard his vest 'snap'! What if it wasn't the vest? What if it was... a rib? Or his spine?"
"Shizune." Temari's voice was harsh. "Get in the water. And act like you're enjoying this girls' day out."
Shizune whimpered but obeyed. She slid into the hot water, letting out a tense "Ah..."
"Good," Temari said, closing her eyes. "Now, quiet. We are... relaxing. We are discussing... desert... flora. Diplomatically."
"But..."
"Quiet."
A minute of tense silence passed, broken only by the drip of water from a bamboo fountain.
"Hey," Shizune whispered, unable to hold back.
"What?" Temari replied, without opening her eyes.
"Do you think Naruto screwed up?"
Temari opened one eye. "Obviously. The question isn't 'if' he screwed up, but 'how catastrophically' he screwed up. Is this a Chūnin-level incident, a Jōnin-level disaster, or are we already at 'declaration of war'?"
"We have to...!" Shizune started to stand up.
"We can't do anything," Temari cut her off, her voice firm. "If we run out of here two minutes after he delivers the message, we'll look guilty. We are here. Relaxing. It's our story and we're sticking to it. Now, where's that sake?"
"Ah! Right! Sake!" Shizune seemed relieved to have a task. She waved desperately at a passing Onsen attendant. "Excuse me! Excuse me! Two bottles of the best Junmai!"
The attendant nodded with a bow and disappeared.
"Good idea," Temari said, allowing herself a small smile. "If we're going to face a diplomatic disaster caused by that idiot, at least we'll do it drunk."
"Temari-san, that's not professional," Shizune chided weakly.
"Shizune, I'm wearing a borrowed purple dress because an idiot disintegrated my pajamas with a Rasengan. I think 'professionalism' went out the window this morning."
"Along with your clothes," Shizune muttered.
"What did you say?"
"Nothing! Just... what nice steam! Very relaxing!"
The attendant returned with a floating wooden tray. She set down two small ceramic carafes and two cups.
"Thanks," Temari said, immediately pouring a cup for herself and one for Shizune. "Drink."
Shizune took her cup with shaking hands. "To... world peace."
"To sake," Temari said, raising her cup.
They were about to drink. The ceramic rim was just about to touch their lips.
"Shizune? What a pleasant surprise."
Shizune froze.
The sake spilled from her cup, dripping into the hot water and hissing as it evaporated.
Temari tensed, every muscle in her body ready for combat. She placed her cup on the floating tray with a slow, deliberate movement.
Slowly, they both turned their heads.
Kurenai was standing by the edge of the bath, wrapped in a towel, her long black hair falling over one shoulder. Her smile was calm and friendly.
And her piercing red eyes weren't missing a thing.
"Kurenai!" Shizune's voice was a high-pitched squeak. She cleared her throat and tried again, sounding even worse. "Hi! What... what... a surprise! Yes! What... a coincidence!"
"So I thought," Kurenai said, sliding gracefully into the water a few feet from them. She moved with a fluidity that made Temari immediately mark her as a threat. "I didn't expect to find you here. Especially not drinking sake. Rough day?"
"Rough day!" Shizune repeated, laughing nervously. "Yes! Super rough! The paperwork! It's brutal! A mountain of it! It almost crushed us!"
Kurenai nodded, her kind smile never wavering. Then, her gaze fell on Temari. It was an analytical look, weighing and measuring.
"And... Temari-san, of Suna. We haven't been formally introduced. I'm Kurenai Yūhi. Konoha Jōnin."
Temari forced a smile. "Ambassador Temari. A pleasure."
"A work meeting in the bath?" Kurenai asked, her tone light, but her eyes incredibly sharp. "Rather... informal."
"Diplomatic wellness!" Shizune blurted out, too quickly, nearly spilling the sake carafe. "Lots of stress! Logistics! The Ambassador was tense! And I, as a good Konoha host, invited her to relax! It's part of my duties!"
"I see," Kurenai said. She leaned back against the rock, steam swirling around her. "A very kind gesture, Shizune. Very thoughtful."
There was a moment of silence. Kurenai seemed to be enjoying the heat. Shizune looked like she was about to boil from the inside.
"It's strange, though," Kurenai said suddenly, as if the thought had just occurred to her.
Shizune froze. "What... what's strange?"
"I just ran into Asuma," Kurenai said, looking up at the bamboo ceiling. "He was on his way to the hospital."
Temari watched Kurenai. This woman is dangerous. Her questions aren't casual. This is an interrogation.
"To the hospital? Is he hurt?" Shizune asked, falling right into the trap.
"Oh, no. Not him," Kurenai said, her voice soft. "He was taking Genma."
Shizune dropped her sake cup. It sank to the bottom of the onsen with a quiet plop.
"...Genma?" Shizune whispered. Her face had lost all color.
"Yes. Such an odd thing," Kurenai continued, her tone casual. "Asuma found him unconscious in the hallway of your building, Shizune. Right outside your apartment."
Shizune's face went from pale to a sick, waxy white; she looked like marble.
Temari intervened, her voice smooth and controlled, trying to redirect. "How terrible. An attack? In broad daylight, in a Jōnin building? Do they have any idea who it was?"
"That's the strangest part," Kurenai said, turning her analytical gaze directly on Temari, acknowledging the maneuver. "It didn't look like an attack. His things were untouched. His wallet, his kunai, everything. Asuma said it looked like... someone had hit him."
Kurenai shifted her gaze back to Shizune, who was visibly trembling.
"A blow designed to incapacitate."
A dead silence fell over the bath. The only sound was the rhythmic drip of the bamboo fountain.
"Genma was... disoriented when he woke up. I saw him briefly," Kurenai said. "He said the last thing he remembered was seeing you, Shizune. And saying 'Good morning' to you."
Shizune wasn't breathing.
Temari closed her eyes. Crap.
"Shizune," Kurenai said, her voice now soft, almost concerned, leaning toward her. "You... you wouldn't know anything about that, would you? You seem very upset. You're pale."
Shizune tried to speak. She opened her mouth.
"I..."
A small, trembling sob escaped her.
"I... Kurenai..."
"Shizune is very sensitive today," Temari cut in, her voice firm. "The stress from work, as we said. We're all under a lot of pressure from the exams."
"Of course," Kurenai said, not taking her piercing gaze off Shizune. "The pressure. I understand."
She paused, letting the silence stretch.
"But it's funny," Kurenai added, her voice still soft. "Because Genma said something else. He was rambling, but he was very specific."
Temari tensed.
"He said Shizune was wearing... a purple dress."
Shizune, who had been staring into the water, snapped her head up, her eyes wide with panic.
Kurenai's gaze followed Shizune's and landed directly on Temari.
"...Exactly like the one you're wearing, Temari-san."
Temari froze.
Crap. Crap. Crap.
Kurenai smiled, "The dress looks good on you, by the way. A little... formal for a bath, but it suits you. But it's a bit obvious, don't you think? It's Shizune's emergency dress from her hospital locker. I recognize it."
Shizune broke.
The sake, the panic, the guilt, the stress, and being so cleanly and methodically caught by one of her closest friends was too much.
"IT WAS ME!" she sobbed, tears welling up in her eyes and mixing with the steam. "I HIT HIM! BUT I DIDN'T MEAN TO! I PANICKED!"
Kurenai stared at her, her expression shifting from analytical suspicion to pure confusion. "What? Shizune? Why...?"
"BECAUSE OF THE DRESS! AND THE KIDNAPPING! AND THE PAJAMAS! AND NARUTO'S RASENGAN!"
A stunned silence.
Kurenai looked at her, now sobbing openly in the water.
Then she looked at Temari, who wore an expression of absolute defeat.
"...Excuse me?" Kurenai said.
Temari slumped against the rock wall, the water splashing around her. She dropped her head back and stared at the bamboo ceiling.
"You just blew our alibi," Temari muttered to the steam. "Congratulations, Shizune."
Kurenai blinked, her elite Jōnin brain trying to process the torrent of words.
"Wait, wait," Kurenai said, holding up a hand. "Shizune. Calm down. Breathe."
Kurenai looked at Temari. "Naruto's... Rasengan... on your pajamas?"
