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Comic Rewards 07-05-2023 Part 2
🕑 Added 2023-07-05 16:26:20 +0000 UTCThe trials and tribulations of Brooke's brother, Jalen, now begin. I was just able to get the first page of that comic done before it was time to upload. But it establishes what it will be about pretty succinctly.
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Bryant Holmes
As they say in the US Navy; "there is no such thing as the wrong hole"
DeltaWolf
That's the wrong hole. :P
FighterFigger
No more Haukaiu chpt. 3 that is. Got it.
Nightdancer
pawing off helps
Jay Naylor
The lot-of-text ones probably won't happen. One thing I've been trying to ensure I do with my comics is more show and not as much tell.
FighterFigger
Don't get me wrong (as I do love your comics), but I rather hoped for some artistic shorts. Yo know, like the ones in the past with a lot of text or no text at all. Diaries, manuals, the "O-natomy" and so on. The pages were less focused on the traditional comic frames. But then again - it might be just me. :-) <3
Matt letterman
I’m so excited for this comic. I love Jalen’s body type and design.
Matt letterman
Here’s to the next 50 pages
Rose Head
Lynne got a lot of investment (deservingly so) , penny got the spotlight, Trixie got two major features in HYRF and FON. While I thought all of these were exquisite and awesome in their own way it’ll be nice to see the perspective of a less exposed character for some time. Im HERE for the ride
Jay Naylor
Specifically Cherokee.
Mary Mauney
He looks very pretty here, I like his hair! Also I’ve always liked how different animal groups in your world correspond to different human ethnicities based on where the species originated from. It just makes sense to me. Like, of course raccoons are Native American, they’re an American species!
Frank
Helllll yeaaaaa, time for the brother to shine!
Big bad boys
Oh !!! We get to see her brother !
Silvador
Curious to see where this one goes.
HowardHam
Becoming a badass field agent is definitely one way to get over your Latina booty call
Antarctican
Or Red recruits Jalen into "The Organization" After and extended evaluation period of course. I can still see Jalen's face through that little space in the center of the art piece where Red shows Him what a good, thorough, fucking is like.
Jay Naylor
That's how it works, yep.
Facundo Daniel
The spirits of the forest only take Jalen where he wants to be: Pepper's back door 😏 An excellent first page for all that is to come. Never stop surprising, Jay! ❤️
William Lepage
Update each moth like the last one?
Tal'Ki
What A handsome boy, hope he finds his way
HowardHam
It would be awesome if Red becomes his mentor/sensei and just has him training out in the woods like Kill Bill
NukePone
Man can't become enlightened because he's thinking about butt stuff.
Doomslayer69
Hmm spiritual quest is an interesting subject to see you do
