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Chapter 119

🕑 Added 2025-09-23 10:12:01 +0000 UTC

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Baelor

Is Leo the source? Was he butthurt from not being able to participate too?

John Smith

I agree with Skylar on this one. You jump around too much and as a result the cliff hangers feel deliberate. I think better practice would be to segregate the perspectives by chapter unless the split is immediately relevant, like the case with Wor-en and the bees.


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