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Better Late Than Never Chapter 16 (The First Breath of Hope, The First Step of Doom)
🕑 Added 2025-10-04 19:49:14 +0000 UTCFuu of Takigakure
The crimson light washed over Fū in waves, each pulse bringing with it a strange sense of familiarity. Within her, Chomei stirred with what could only be described as joy.
This feeling... Fū thought, her partially transformed body hovering between the two armies. It's like the Tree is breathing again.
"What's happening?" Shibuki demanded, shielding his eyes against the intensifying glow.
Fū couldn't answer immediately. Her senses, already enhanced by Chomei's influence, were suddenly overwhelmed with information. She could feel the chakra network of the entire Tree shifting, realigning, nodes lighting up that had been dormant for generations.
"The seal," she finally managed, her voice carrying that dual-toned quality that indicated Chomei was speaking with her. "The original seal has been restored."
Around her, the battlefield was transforming. The corrupted Hero Water that had given the civilians their unstable purple chakra began to change, the toxic color fading as the Tree's newly balanced energy purified it from within. People who had been locked in combat moments before stopped, expressions of confusion and wonder replacing rage as they felt the change rippling through them.
In the outer ring, civilians who hadn't participated in the fighting emerged cautiously from their homes, drawn by the strange light. Fū watched as an elderly woman stepped into the open, her face lifting toward the pulsing glow. Tears streaked down the woman's weathered cheeks as she extended gnarled hands into the crimson-tinged air.
"I can feel it," the woman whispered, though Fū could hear her clearly from twenty meters away. "The Tree's blessing again."
Similar scenes played out across the village as the balanced chakra reached areas that had been deprived for centuries. Children laughed in delight as tiny motes of light danced around them. Adults stood transfixed, experiencing something their ancestors had described in stories but they had never known themselves.
"What have you done?" Shibuki's voice cut through Fū's observations, tight with barely controlled anger. "Do you have any idea what this means?"
Fū turned to face him, her three tails swaying behind her. "It means the Tree's chakra flows as it was meant to. As it did before the corruption."
"Before the protection," Shibuki countered, stepping closer despite the obvious danger of approaching a partially transformed jinchūriki. "That seal was put in place for a reason. The Great Sickness—"
"Was a single incident in our history," Fū interrupted. "One terrible event that became the excuse for generations of inequality." Her golden eyes swept across the assembled jonin, noting their mixed reactions—confusion, anger, and in a few faces, something that might have been relief. "Look around you, Shibuki. The Tree is healing itself, and it's healing Takigakure with it."
Several of the elite shinobi were indeed looking around with expressions of wonder. The chakra in the air was different—cleaner somehow, more harmonious. Even those who had been prepared to fight to the death to maintain the old system could feel the difference.
"This is a mistake," Seiji said, drawing their attention. The purple veins had faded from his skin, leaving him looking older and more tired, but his eyes remained sharp. "Not because balance is wrong, but because you think this solves everything."
Fū tilted her head, surprised by this assessment from the rebellion's leader.
"The system wasn't just about chakra distribution," Seiji continued, addressing both sides. "It was about power. Resources. Generations of societal structure built around who gets what." He gestured to the changing color of the Hero Water in nearby vials. "This may purify the water, but it doesn't purify human nature."
"Incoming," one of the jonin suddenly called, pointing upward. "Something's falling from the Tree's crown!"
Fū's enhanced vision caught it immediately—a small orange form tumbling through the air from an impossible height.
"Naruto!" she gasped, her wings instantly flaring wider as she prepared to launch herself upward.
"Wait," Shibuki ordered. "That's a ten-mile drop. Even you can't—"
But Fū was already airborne, her wings beating frantically as she shot upward. Calculations raced through her mind—distance, speed, time to impact. It wasn't promising. At his current velocity, Naruto would hit the ground long before she could reach him.
Chomei, she thought desperately. We need more speed!
I'm with you, came the reply, and Fū felt her transformation deepening. The three tails extended, becoming more substantial, and her wings doubled in size, their beat becoming a blur even to her own eyes. The acceleration pushed her back, wind tearing at her face as she rocketed higher.
But even with this boost, she could see she wouldn't make it in time. Naruto was falling too fast, and she had started from too low.
Just as despair began to set in, a white blur shot past her—a massive toad leaping from branch to branch up the Mother Tree, its powerful legs propelling it at incredible speed. Atop it stood a familiar white-haired figure.
"Lord Jiraiya!" Fū called, relief flooding through her.
The Sannin didn't acknowledge her, his focus entirely on the plummeting form of his student. He directed the toad's final leap, timing it perfectly to intersect with Naruto's fall.
Fū hovered, wings beating steadily as she watched Jiraiya catch Naruto's unconscious form in mid-air. The toad twisted, landing heavily on a massive branch with both shinobi secure on its back.
She altered course, flying to meet them as the toad began its more controlled descent.
"Is he...?" she couldn't bring herself to finish the question as she drew alongside.
Jiraiya looked up, his expression a mix of pride and exasperation. "Alive? Yes. The idiot channeled enough chakra to kill ten jonin, but he's alive." He adjusted Naruto's position, revealing the boy's face—peaceful in unconsciousness despite the angry red chakra burns visible on his exposed skin. "What exactly happened here?"
"He restored the Tree's original seal," Fū explained, maintaining her position beside the descending toad with steady wingbeats. "Balanced the chakra flow throughout Takigakure."
Jiraiya's eyes widened momentarily before narrowing in calculation. "A seal that's stood for centuries? That's..." He looked down at his unconscious student with new appreciation. "Impressive. And completely reckless."
"That seems to be his specialty," Fū observed with a small smile. "Being both at once."
"You have no idea," Jiraiya muttered, though there was unmistakable affection beneath the gruffness. "He's going to be out for days after this. Channeling that much bijuu chakra..." He shook his head. "The fact he's alive at all is a minor miracle."
As they descended, Fū could see the changes spreading throughout Takigakure. Fighting had ceased entirely, replaced by a strange mix of celebration and confusion. In the outer rings, people were emerging from their homes, many openly weeping as they felt the Tree's balanced energy for the first time. Closer to the core, the elite looked uncertain, some angry at the sudden change, others simply bewildered.
"He's done something incredible," she said softly. "But Seiji was right—this is just the beginning. Changing the flow of chakra is easier than changing hearts and minds."
Jiraiya grunted in agreement. "Politics is always messier than jutsu. At least with techniques, there are clear rules about what works and what doesn't."
The toad landed near the central plaza where Shibuki and Seiji stood in an uneasy ceasefire, surrounded by their respective forces. All eyes turned to Jiraiya as he descended with Naruto's unconscious form.
"Well," Jiraiya said, surveying the scene with the practiced eye of someone who had witnessed more than his share of post-battle aftermaths, "looks like my student stirred up quite the hornet's nest here."
"Your student," Shibuki replied, his voice cold, "interfered in matters that were none of his concern."
"True," Jiraiya acknowledged easily, though Fū noted how his arm tightened protectively around Naruto. "He has a habit of doing that when he sees people suffering."
The tension in the plaza was palpable. Despite the restored balance of the Tree's chakra, the human elements—pride, resentment, fear of change—remained very much in play.
As if sensing her thoughts, Chomei's voice whispered in her mind: Have faith, little one. Trees grow slowly, but they grow nonetheless.
Fū hoped the ancient bijuu was right. Because while Naruto had done the impossible in restoring the Mother Tree's balance, the real work of healing Takigakure was only just beginning.
Three Hours Later
The Great Council Chamber of Takigakure had been designed to intimidate. Carved directly into the heart of the Mother Tree's middle section, its circular walls soared twenty feet high, adorned with intricate carvings depicting the village's history. Massive roots formed natural columns that supported a domed ceiling where carefully cultivated luminescent fungi provided soft, blue-green light.
Fū stood at the chamber's edge, her transformation now reverted to fully human form, though the exhaustion of maintaining it for so long left her muscles trembling. She watched as the emergency council assembled—ten senior jonin arranged in a semicircle, with Elder Shibuki at the center, his weathered face set in grim lines. Seiji had been brought in under guard, though they hadn't bound him, perhaps out of respect for his position as High Priest.
They're making a show of power, Fū thought, noting how the arrangement placed Shibuki literally above everyone else. Reinforcing the hierarchy even as it crumbles beneath them.
Jiraiya stood near the entrance, arms crossed casually over his chest, though Fū could sense the tension in his stance. Naruto lay on a stretcher behind him, still unconscious, attended by a medic who had been instructed to keep him stable but nothing more.
"This emergency session of the Takigakure Council is now convened," Shibuki announced, his voice echoing through the chamber. "We face an unprecedented crisis. Both the rebellion itself and the unauthorized alteration of our village's foundational seal."
Murmurs spread through the gathered jonin. Many still looked shellshocked, struggling to process the dramatic events of the morning.
"First," Shibuki continued, "let us acknowledge what has occurred. The seal created by our ancestors to protect the Tree's distribution system has been... restored to its original configuration." The admission seemed to cost him something. "The chakra now flows evenly throughout all sectors of Takigakure."
"As it should," Seiji interjected, earning a sharp look from Shibuki.
"You will speak when addressed, Seiji," Shibuki snapped. "Your position as High Priest does not excuse your actions today."
Seiji bowed his head slightly, though Fū could see the defiance hadn't left his eyes.
"While this change to our village's fundamental structure requires careful consideration," Shibuki continued, "it does not excuse the violent uprising that has cost dozens of lives this day." His gaze hardened as he looked at Seiji. "Those responsible must face justice."
"I accept full responsibility," Seiji said, stepping forward. "The civilians followed my lead, acted on my instructions."
"Noble, but insufficient," Shibuki replied. "Your co-conspirators—particularly those who distributed corrupted Hero Water—must also be held accountable. I hereby order the arrest of all cult leaders and those civilians who took up arms against Takigakure shinobi."
The announcement sent a ripple of outrage through the civilian observers who had been permitted to attend. Their protests rose in volume until one of the senior jonin slammed his fist against the wooden table.
"Silence!" he bellowed. "You forget yourselves. The restoration of the seal doesn't change who you are—civilians who have never trained in chakra use, never sworn oaths to protect this village. This is a military installation as much as it is your home, and it is not your place to interfere in security matters."
The rebuke silenced some, but others continued to protest until Shibuki rose to his feet.
"Enough!" he commanded. "Those of you not directly involved in planning or executing today's violence should count yourselves fortunate not to join the arrested. As it stands, you have betrayed Takigakure's trust, disrupted its peace, and caused irreparable harm to our village's stability."
Wrong approach, Fū thought, watching faces harden among the civilian contingent. He's only widening the divide.
"Betrayed?" A woman's voice rose above the others, trembling with emotion. "We've given everything to this village! Our labor, our children, our lives—while watching our families suffer from shortages that never seemed to reach the inner rings."
More voices joined hers, the tension in the room threatening to erupt into fresh conflict. Fū tensed, preparing to intervene if necessary, when Seiji raised his hands.
"Please," he called, his voice gentle and heard throughout the entire room. "My friends, my followers—hear me."
The civilians gradually quieted, their respect for the High Priest evident despite his current position.
"Faith, Civilians, and Shinobi," Seiji began, his voice measured and calm. "These are the three pillars upon which every hidden village stands. The shinobi protect our borders and execute missions. The civilians provide infrastructure, goods, services—the foundation of daily life. And faith—faith gives us purpose, connection to something greater than ourselves."
He turned slowly, addressing not just his followers but the entire chamber.
"When these pillars work in harmony, a village prospers. When one tries to dominate the others, the structure weakens." His gaze met Shibuki's directly. "Yes, there must be accountability for today's violence. But there must also be acknowledgment of the conditions that led to it."
"I will surrender myself willingly," Seiji concluded, "and I ask my followers to do the same. Not because we were wrong to seek change, but because violence against our own community can never be the right path. The seal's restoration gives us the opportunity to rebuild Takigakure as it was meant to be—balanced, harmonious, just. Let us not squander that opportunity with further bloodshed."
The chamber fell silent as his words settled. Several civilians who had been on the verge of walking out now looked thoughtful, conflicted. Even Shibuki seemed momentarily at a loss for how to respond to this dignified surrender that simultaneously challenged his authority.
Finally, the Elder cleared his throat. "Your surrender is accepted. Guards, take the High Priest into custody...with appropriate respect for his station." Two jonin moved forward, flanking Seiji without touching him. "The rest of the conspirators have until sundown to present themselves voluntarily. After that, they will be hunted."
As Seiji was led away, Shibuki turned his attention to Jiraiya, his expression hardening once more.
"As for you, Jiraiya of the Sannin," he said, "and your unconscious student. We have matters to discuss regarding your interference in Takigakure's internal affairs."
Jiraiya stepped forward, standing straight, and Fuu could not remember his face ever appearing so serious.
"Elder Shibuki," he acknowledged with a respectful nod. "I offer no excuses for what's occurred. My student acted on his own initiative, but as his master, the responsibility ultimately falls to me."
"This is far more than a student's impulsive action," Shibuki replied sharply. "The boy accessed our most sacred space, altered a seal fundamental to our village's structure, and injected himself into a conflict that was not his concern. These actions could be interpreted as acts of war under the shinobi code."
Fū felt her stomach clench at the implications. Despite the restoration of the seal benefiting many in Takigakure, the violation of sovereignty was undeniable from a political standpoint.
"I understand the gravity of the situation," Jiraiya said, his tone genuinely contrite. "And I offer Konoha's sincere apologies for this unauthorized intervention. Whatever reparations Takigakure deems appropriate—"
"Reparations?" Shibuki interrupted with a harsh laugh. "What could possibly repair the breach of trust? The exposure of our most closely guarded secrets?" His eyes flicked briefly to Fū before returning to Jiraiya. "No, what we require is your immediate departure from our territory."
Jiraiya's expression remained carefully neutral. "Of course. As soon as my student is stable enough for travel—"
"You misunderstand," Shibuki cut in again. "You specifically are to leave immediately. Consider yourself officially expelled from Takigakure."
"And Naruto?" Jiraiya asked, tension evident in his voice.
Shibuki's gaze moved to the unconscious form on the stretcher. "The boy may remain until he recovers consciousness. Our medics will ensure his survival, though nothing more." His eyes narrowed. "He is fortunate I still hold respect for you, Jiraiya, for what you did for our village thirteen years ago. For that service alone, your student will not be hunted for his transgressions, nor will this incident be officially reported to Konoha."
Fū frowned slightly at the mention of thirteen years ago. She would have been only two then, the same year she lost her mother according to what Shibuki told her.
"I appreciate your discretion," Jiraiya said carefully. "Though I must protest leaving my student—"
"This is not negotiable," Shibuki stated flatly. "You have until sunset to gather your belongings and depart. The boy will be permitted to leave once he's recovered—under escort to our borders."
Fū could see the conflict in Jiraiya's stance. After a long moment, he bowed slightly.
"Very well. I accept your terms." He turned to Fū. "I entrust my student's care to you, if you're willing."
The request surprised her, and apparently Shibuki as well, who opened his mouth to object before closing it again. After all, who better to watch over a jinchūriki than another jinchūriki?
"I'll look after him," Fū agreed, ignoring the disapproving looks from some of the council members.
Chomei, what do you think Jiraiya did thirteen years ago? she silently asked her bijuu.
Use your head, little one, came the gentle reply. How old were you when you became a Jinchuuriki?
Fuu's eyes widened, and she looked at Jiraiya as if seeing for the first time, she had never thought that he was the one who did it.
"This council is adjourned," Shibuki announced, rising from his seat. "We will reconvene tomorrow to discuss the long-term implications of today's events. Until then, all sectors remain under martial law, and the curfew will be strictly enforced."
As the council members filed out, Fū moved to the stretcher where Naruto lay. His breathing was shallow but steady, the angry red chakra burns already beginning to fade. A benefit of his jinchūriki status.
"He'll recover," Jiraiya said quietly, coming to stand beside her. "The kid's too stubborn to do otherwise."
"Why did you ask me to watch over him?" Fū questioned, keeping her voice low.
Jiraiya's eyes held a knowing gleam. "Because you understand what he is. What he carries." A faint smile crossed his face. "And because I suspect you two have more in common than just your tenant situations."
He means our shared stubbornness, Fū thought with reluctant amusement. And perhaps our unwillingness to accept things as they are.
"I'll make sure he doesn't cause any more trouble," she promised, though both knew it was probably a lie.
"Don't make promises you can't keep," Jiraiya replied with a short laugh. "Just make sure he survives to cause trouble another day."
As the Sannin turned to leave, Fū found herself with one final question. "Thirteen years ago," she said softly. "That was you, wasn't it?"
Jiraiya paused but didn't turn around. "Some secrets are better left in the past," he answered cryptically, then continued walking, his broad shoulders disappearing through the chamber doors, leaving Fū alone with the unconscious Naruto.
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Naruto
Consciousness returned to Naruto slowly, like swimming up through layers of murky water. Pain came first, a deep, pervasive ache that seemed embedded in every cell of his body. Then sensation, soft sheets beneath him, cool air on his face. Finally, awareness, as his eyelids fluttered open with a groan that felt scraped from the depths of his throat.
"He lives!" a familiar voice exclaimed.
Naruto blinked several times, his vision gradually focusing on Fū's face hovering above him. Her green hair was pulled back in a loose ponytail, her orange eyes bright with relief. She sat perched on the edge of his bed, a small smile playing at the corners of her mouth.
"About time you decided to join us," she said, her tone light despite the concern evident in her expression. "I was starting to think you planned to hibernate through summer."
"Feels like I got trampled by Gamabunta," Naruto croaked, his voice rough from disuse. Even his tongue felt heavy and uncooperative.
What happened? he wondered, trying to piece together his fragmented memories. The Tree's core. The Kyuubi's chakra. The seal breaking. Then... nothing.
Fū reached for a glass of water on a nearby table. "Here," she said, carefully supporting his head as she held the glass to his lips. "Small sips."
The water felt like heaven on his parched throat. Naruto drank gratefully, becoming more aware of his surroundings with each passing moment. White walls. White ceiling. White sheets. The distinct smell of antiseptic.
"Where am I?" he asked once he'd drained half the glass.
Fū arched an eyebrow, amusement dancing in her eyes. "Really? All this white and that antiseptic smell didn't give it away?" She gestured around them. "Welcome to the Healing Branches, Takigakure's finest and only hospital."
"Healing Branches," Naruto repeated with a little smile. "How long have I been here?"
"A week," Fū replied, setting the water glass down. "You've been unconscious since your dramatic dive from the Tree's crown. Lucky for you, Jiraiya was there to catch you, or we'd be having this conversation in the afterlife."
"A week?" Naruto tried to sit up, a decision he immediately regretted as pain lanced through his body. He fell back with a hiss, sweat beading on his forehead from the simple effort.
"Easy," Fū cautioned, placing a gentle hand on his shoulder. "You channeled enough bijuu chakra to kill ten jonin. The fact that you're alive at all is impressive. Moving without tearing something is probably asking too much right now."
Naruto relaxed back against the pillows, acknowledging the wisdom in her words. Now that he was more alert, he could feel the extent of the damage, chakra burns along his pathways, muscle strain from the climb, and a bone-deep exhaustion unlike anything he'd experienced before.
"What happened?" he asked. "After I broke the seal, I mean. Did it work?"
Fū's expression turned somber. "It worked. The Tree's chakra flows naturally throughout Takigakure now. The corrupted Hero Water purified itself, saving many who would have died otherwise."
"And the fighting?"
"Stopped, for the most part," she said, though her tone suggested qualifications to follow. "The immediate crisis was resolved, but..."
"But?" Naruto prompted when she trailed off.
Fū sighed, absently brushing a strand of hair behind her ear. "Restoring the chakra flow was necessary, but not sufficient. The social divisions, the hierarchies, the resentments, they don't disappear overnight just because the physical imbalance is corrected."
She went on to explain what had happened in the week he'd been unconscious: Seiji's surrender and imprisonment, the arrests of rebellion leaders, the emergency council meetings debating Takigakure's future governance. The outer rings now had access to pure Hero Water, but many families still mourned those lost in the fighting. The elite had lost their monopoly on the Tree's blessing, but they retained most of their political power and weren't relinquishing it without resistance.
As Fū spoke, Naruto felt his initial hope fading. He'd naively believed that fixing the seal would solve everything—that once the chakra flowed evenly, so too would justice and harmony. The reality was messier, more complicated.
"So nothing's really changed," he muttered, disappointment heavy in his chest.
"Don't say that," Fū chided, her voice suddenly fierce. "Everything's changed. The outer ring children no longer get sick from contaminated water. The civilians feel the Tree's energy for the first time in generations. The foundation for real change has been laid." Her expression softened. "You did more than enough, Naruto. More than anyone thought possible."
"You really think so?"
"I know so," she replied without hesitation. "I'm... I'm very glad you came to Takigakure."
Something in her tone made Naruto look at her more closely. For the first time, he truly appreciated that they were both jinchūriki, both vessels for cursed powers, both bridges between human and bijuu worlds.
"Where's Percy Sage?" he asked, suddenly realizing his mentor's absence. "Is the old man mad at me?"
A flicker of discomfort crossed Fū's face. "He's waiting for you at the village border."
"The border? Why isn't he here?"
Fū shifted slightly, her hand still resting near his on the bedsheet. "Because of your... intervention in Takigakure affairs, Elder Shibuki expelled Jiraiya from the village. He's only allowing you to remain until you're well enough to travel."
"I'm banned from Takigakure?" Naruto asked with wide eyes.
"Not officially banned," Fū clarified. "But strongly encouraged never to return. Shibuki was explicit that you're only still here because you needed medical attention."
Never return. The implications sank in slowly. Never see Takigakure again. Never climb the Mother Tree. Never see Fū...
Memories flooded back. Their first meeting at the waterfall, her exhilarating flight over the village, their heated argument about bijuu, their reconciliation in the outer rings. And with those memories came regret. How much time had he wasted being angry with her over her friendship with Chomei? How many days could they have spent learning from each other, if only he'd been more open-minded?
"I'm sorry," he said softly.
"For what?" Fū asked, looking genuinely puzzled.
"For wasting so much time." Naruto met her eyes directly. "When you told me about you and Chomei being friends, I got so angry. I couldn't understand it. I spent days avoiding you, fighting with you. And now..." He gestured weakly at their surroundings. "Now I have to leave, and I wasted so much of the time we had."
Fū's eyes glistened with unshed tears, but her smile remained steady. She reached out and took his hand in hers, her grip warm and reassuring.
"Our paths will cross again, Naruto Uzumaki," she said with quiet certainty. "We're jinchūriki. The world has a way of bringing us together, whether we plan it or not."
Looking at her...really looking at her...Naruto was struck by how beautiful she was. Not just physically, though her features were certainly striking with those unusual orange eyes and mint-green hair. But beautiful in spirit, in the way she'd found harmony with her bijuu, in how she navigated the complex loyalties of her position with grace and determination.
"I hope you're right," he said, squeezing her hand weakly.
"Ahh, how romantic," a voice drawled from the direction of the window. "Isn't that right, Kakuzu?"
The voice made Naruto's blood freeze in his veins. He and Fū turned simultaneously toward the source, their hands still clasped together.
Standing in the open window were two figures in black cloaks adorned with red clouds. The one who had spoken leaned casually on a massive triple-bladed scythe, his silver hair slicked back, a malicious grin splitting his face. Beside him stood a taller, broader man whose face was mostly concealed, only his eyes visible, cold, calculating eyes that assessed them like merchandise rather than people. In one hand, he held a metal plate bearing Takigakure's symbol with a deep scratch carved through it.
"Akatsuki," Naruto whispered, the word falling from his lips like a curse.
Fū's grip on his hand tightened almost painfully.
"The Nine-Tails and the Seven-Tails," the masked one...Kakuzu...observed, his voice a deep rumble that seemed to emanate from somewhere inhuman. "Two jinchūriki for the price of one. How... efficient."
He raised a hand, pointing directly at them with his finger. "You will both come with us now."
Naruto felt a surge of desperate panic. His body was still recovering, barely able to sit up, let alone fight. Beside him, Fū had risen to her feet, her stance protective, but against two Akatsuki members? The odds were catastrophic.
Kyuubi, he called silently into the depths of his mind. I need you. We need you.
As the two Akatsuki members stepped into the room, Naruto struggled to push himself upright, ignoring the screaming protest of his damaged body. Whatever happened next, he wouldn't face it lying down.
"Touch her," he growled, his voice taking on the dual-toned quality that signaled the Kyuubi's influence, "and I'll tear you apart."
The silver-haired one merely laughed, twirling his scythe with casual menace. "Oh, I'm going to enjoy this," he said, licking his lips in anticipation. "Lord Jashin appreciates spirited sacrifices."
Kakuzu made the first move, and the hospital room exploded...
Comments
decimator 66
Mr writer I mean this in the nicest way possible but you are such a cuck. Stopping right as the fight for the two jinjuriki begins ohhh you got me invested, which you do for most of your stories
Zeldris
Banishing Jiraiya feels quite harsh especially considering he was the one to seal Chomei in Fuu also the cliffhanger is diabolical
