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Steering Committee Poll - Next Adult Comic
🕑 Added 2022-09-14 15:21:42 +0000 UTC
It is time to choose. I'm feeling pretty overwhelmed with all the ideas I have, so I need you, the steering committee, to help me out. You know how this works.
Vote on as many as you're interested in, and I'll get a good sense of the priority of interests involved here. I've emphasized the main character's names in the descriptions so you can easily reference who's featured in the stories. Here we go:
1.Mistress Addict - In the wake of Kaori leaving, Bruce tries to find a replacement mistress who can treat him similarly, among his new female hookups. This will have lots of kink and some femdom themes with a funny/quirky emphasis. It will also develop Bruce as a main.
2. Relapse - Beth is pregnant and living in her winter home with her hired nanny, when Ty drops in for a visit. She finds herself still hypercharged in his presence. This is largely a pregnant-sex expose, and probably won't be too lengthy. But it'll give Ty a little more humanity, so to speak, as a side effect.
3. Donation - Mary decides she wants a child. With Audrey's count pretty low, they turn to Aron to provide an adequate donation. This will feature Aron crossdressing and have an emphasis on funny/quirky moments.
4. The Shadow - Red confounds Jalen's quest for self discovery and mystic revelation after stumbling upon her in the wilderness. This follows the depiction of their meeting in Brooke Goes To College Part 3. Sorta funny-serious in tone.
5. Sperm Warfare - This covers the course of Billie's latest fertile period, and her assortment of sex partners during, where she's attempting to get pregnant again. This is the same fertile period where she met Penny. This will feature some toonish depictions of sperm competition within her body from the different partners she collects along the way. Fertility emphasis, down to the cellular level, with funny moments.
6. Falling in Place - A look at the nature of the unlikely pairing of Francis and Alicia over the summer, and how they've grown to become mutually casual, low maintenance lovers. This comic is mostly a vibe about finding the person who fits you like a glove, and won't be especially long.
7. Mouse Farm - From the Lumpkinville universe, Tina's mice stage a revolution and take over her country manor. She finds herself on the receiving end of their swarming sexual oppression. Kink and bondage emphasis with funny/silly things strewn throughout.
8. The Voyeur - Francesca finds elaborate ways to spy on and record the sexual lives of those who live around her. This will explore Francesca, a lot, and include Pepper, Sophia, and Javier, as well as Billie, Brice, and some possibles I don't want to spoil. This will also feature a lot of Francesca masturbating.
9. How You Really Feel - Trixie goes looking for an old ex to see how he's doing. Unable to see him, she instead finds herself involved in growing sexual tension with his available father. This story will feature Leo (Lucy and Tommy's son - no he won't be having sex), and Serena, the lioness policewoman and steering committee creation. This will probably be a longer comic. It'll have sexual tension, a theme of unusual pairings, age differences, young crushes, and being arrested for public indecency. The tone will be funny/serious.
Sorry there's so much! They've been building up over time. But please vote for the ones that seem like they'd be your favorites to see. If the super popular ones seem to be pretty close, I may do run-offs. I'll keep this poll up til Friday.
Thank you!
Comments
JBSEM99
I voted for 2. "The Shadow" is the one that I prefer the most because I like the potential dynamic between Red and Jalen (along with what would be great sex scenes). "How You Really Feel" makes me curious, especially since Leo would be in it and I'm wondering who the father could be.
Jay Naylor
Francesca would be great in a color comic. But also more time consuming to make sure her pattern was somewhat consistent from angle to angle, shot to shot. I always do this to myself. :3
Sagher
I love Francesca’s character design, would be great to see her harlequin pattern in a full color comic! Relapse, The Shadow, and How You Really Feel are also intriguing. A nice way for us to get something that feels fresh and exciting for the older characters. 😌
Manrid Brizon
Having already written a story about a 30-year-old divorced rabbit woman with an 18-year-old human boyfriend, I'm curious to see what's up with Trixie and the age-difference stuff.
Matt letterman
Oh yeah lol I know Aron is straight lol. Genwyn on the other hand… 💅💅💅
Aramis Calcutt
Anything that results in pregnancy is my favorite, especially if unplanned!
Aramis Calcutt
Thanks! I should have been able to figure that out. D’oh!
Wildboy5699
I would like to see the story of how Francis and Alicia met and how they got together. But since it's got the lowest vote. I guess it won't happen for a while. Oh well, it ain't the end of the world.
Kaya Rainbird
voting for how you really feel for dilf possbility. im chill with anything tho as long as the art is good as always!
Jay Naylor
Wait. I thought you were talking about Aron. If you're talking about Genwyn, yeah, he's bi. Anyway.
Matt letterman
Yeah I see what you mean, boxing sexuality in to one uniform label I guess is just a force of habit when in reality it’s more of a spectrum . I mean I’m Pan myself but I have a preference for “traditionally” woman traits in partners as well. & at the end of the day we are just tryna get laid lmao.
Jay Naylor
He's not bisexual. He's not attracted to men for their masculine qualities. At least that's how I see it. He's attracted to female qualities. Body shape, manner, face, etc.
Dale Evans
The Billie “sperm wars” concept is so unique and funny but kinda hot in a weird way. I’d love to see it!
Matt letterman
Oh I did not know that. I just think having a Bi male character is a great change of pace and sort of an interesting story to kinda dive into with the complications and dilemmas that come from him trying to kinda “figure” out his dating life.
Jay Naylor
The Billie "story" is something that can almost be done in a smaller way some other time, too. We shall see.
Inusama
I'd love to see the Billie concept, and I loved Normal Perverts so if Francis and Alicia are anything like that, I'd be happy to see that too. Not quite surprised at the results so far though lol.
person126
Mouse Farm sounds fantastic, the Tina/mice dynamic is pretty much my favorite thing, their relationship is so intriguing. Would love to see more! I love all of the mouse characters (Penny, Penelope, the upcoming Polly) but the dom/sub thing elevates Tina's mice even more. (At least one of the mice needs to have a name that starts with P!)
Antarctican
I really enjoy Billie's Mature character. I could see her scheming to get bent over a kitchen sink while showing a house to a handsome prospect and other similar hi jinks. Expanding Her World and lore would be cool. Red's sharing the "Meaning of Life" with Jared would be enjoyable also and could bring us up to date on Her latest adventures and give Jared some needed direction. Bruce deserves the a break simply because of his recent experiences. My two Cent worth. Thanks for the excellent art and story telling. I appreciate it Jay.
The Birb King
Donation and Sperm Warfare
Rose Head
Sure, I mean you could show us each partner Billie was with around the same time she was with penny in just one montage page. Folks could go for that and it’s not as much to tackle on your end.
Jay Naylor
It's from "Chasing Justin" which I finished as the main adult comic earlier this year. If you use the "comic" tag to search for comic entries and go back in time for main comic updates, you should be able to find it and read it. I think the complete comic was posted on May 5th's update.
Shawn Barr
I voted for Sperm Warfare. But I'd be very interested, in knowing the story behind the featured picture of the bunny harem. I do loove sexy bunnies.
Jay Naylor
He's kind of owned by a real life friend, so I don't want to use him super extensively, as I do Brooke. Though I'm kind of sure he wouldn't care, he's not really my creation. Lynne is, though.
Matt letterman
Aron is my favorite character just because of how nonchalant he is. with Gen as a close 2nd. Although I would love to see Gen get a little more development as far as like figuring out more about himself other than just him banging his friends and sister. I’d sure love to see like a “Gen goes to college” type thing in the future.
Jay Naylor
If it becomes a project, people can vote on whose sperm wins.
Jay Naylor
Bruce is getting development no matter what. The Billie thing could probably be abbreviated into something else if it loses. If I have the time.
Rose Head
O my god sperm warfare PLEASE I would love to see Billie just absolutely run through but this is a proper ranked choice system here I won’t gripe.
Rose Head
If the Bruce and Billie stories don’t win this one that’s fine by me. Save the best for later on I say DEFINITELY keep those in the clip for later on they’re gold.
Cute Uncle Gobu
I had an Idea for something like that involving Flounce, but instead of a traditional therapy setting it would like an AA meeting but for cucks. I was inspired by a Tyrone Biggums skit.
Jay Naylor
In the body of the message. You may have to hit the "read more" link depending on what platform you're viewing on.
Aramis Calcutt
I’m fairly new. Are there synopses for these titles?
Jay Naylor
I have an idea for Penelope that isn't developed enough yet to commit to soon enough. But yeah, I do have ideas for her. I also didn't know how popular it'd be to have two comics in a row about bushy, untrimmed women. Not that I mind, but still, I like to space them out for the fans. :3
Texas Gent
Awwww, oh well
Vaga the jaguar aka spice seagoat
Revolution time yay!! ^^
Anne
Still a little sad the Penelope follow-up didn't make the cut, but so many great options here! I chose... Relapse (Because Beth is an all time favorite character and at her best when she's emotionally conflicted...and hopefully her pregnancy leads her back to some kind of friends or family in the end) Donation (Because we haven't seen enough of Mary and that whole situation is such a beautiful comedy of errors) The Shadow (Because it's a unique crossover of storylines and very different characters) Mouse Farm (Because it's exactly the kind of quirky, sexual humor Lumpkinville portrays so perfectly)
Anne
“All happy families are alike; each unhappy family is unhappy in its own way.”
Jay Naylor
Haha, probably not, sorry. Rabbit Ram Ranch isn't quite my jam.
Texas Gent
So many good ideas! But my best hope is for Billie, she needs her comic. Although that mouse farm sounds too damn funny to say no to (I wonder if we’ll get another peek at the gay farm too?)
Jay Naylor
Which?
The Birb King
I like 2 of them tho equally!
CunningRedFox
Voting for The Voyeur since I want to see a big breasted bunny.
Fanjangil
Shadow. I just want to see more Red, without a doubt. Also put a vote for Mouse Farm because... Yes? It sounds like a good comic!
Jay Naylor
It's not about what's healthy. It's about what's interesting.
Remy Snow
I was gonna make a joke about some of your characters going to therapy or confession about their sex lives... but fuck, you already did both.
Jay Naylor
Haha
Cute Uncle Gobu
Thanks for all the sick band name ideas
Shadewing
aron crossdressing? hell yes, gimme that any day
Beleynn
I see Red, I vote for Red. easy
T-rex 1973
Lots of good choices, but Beth has to be #1 for me. I picked a couple others I liked too
pokediginut
Honestly like 80% of these majorly interest me as comic ideas. Only 2 of them don’t catch my eye in comparison to the others so I voted for a lot of em
