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Comic Rewards 04-05-2018

🕑 Added 2018-04-05 16:42:13 +0000 UTC

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They worked for Dave first, then Priscilla, but both of them could not have known one another, but hey, it's not My story, it's Jay Naylor's, but yes that was a translation mistake for sure!

Alexey Belovolsky

Accustomed to seeing this couple as servants in Priscilla's mansion, I was pleasantly surprised by the change of scenery. it seems to me that Mai and Minh look just great on the beach and on the crest of a wave. I think I would like to see them on a walk more often. I've never seen Trent before (maybe he already appeared in earlier comics), but this character aroused great interest in me. Also, it would be very interesting to know how he managed to break the Priscilla's heart. In my opinion, a very... mmm… racy story may be hiding here.)) And, finally, it is very interesting, what "third option" was invented by Minh. I hope, in one of the following comics, we will certainly know what choice the twins made. And one more thing. It seemed to me that on the last page in the phrase "Between Priscilla and Dave, I just don’t know" should not be the name of Dave, but the name of Trent. Although, perhaps, I made a mistake with the translation of the dialogue?)) Thank you very much for another great comic! And yes, Beth, is beautiful, as always!

Paddy

Oh! Oh my, the wincest. 0.,0

Gebreel

I suppose given their other appearances and the first half I wasn't expecting two rounds of missionary, one meant to convey an emotional connection, in their own comic. It's fine if it did not work for me, I see what you were attempting to relate now.

Jay Naylor

Hm. Because I guess to me, that kind of missionary sex is on another level, it feels more connected, and I really enjoy it. I think you're just saying perfunctory a lot because you don't connect with it. Maybe it's my fault for trying to convey that with their characters. The noticing that Mai and Minh have a connection beyond physical gratification wouldn't be properly served by a scene that was distractingly kinky, in my judgment. That's my call. Thanks for your input, though.

glitch

I'm looking forward to seeing how the twins' relationship progresses. And how did I not until just now notice the shit-eating cat-grins they have on the first page?

The way the story is heading gives us many possible ways to continue another adventure with the twins. :3 I enjoyed this comic and wanna thank you for the smooth ending it has. Really enjoyable! Personally I hope that they stay at her current workplace because the situations are always so funny! :-D

smurli

Thank you 💗 i love your art 😄

Gebreel

No, just no kink, when it's that sphere of characters I don't expect vanilla missionary sex followed swiftly by the end. He was perfunctory, the sex felt perfunctory, but I did like the first half and I'm sure Beth will be satisfyingly kinky.

Jay Naylor

Ah. Well, him not having as much gay sex as you want, given your preference, does not perfunctory make. But I understand your disappointment. He was important in an entirely different respect.

Gebreel

I liked the first half, but then it was just two rounds of vanilla missionary. I was expecting more kink from the kinkosphere couple, to reference your infographic.