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Behind the walls [Non sexual content]
🕑 Added 2024-10-29 20:00:05 +0000 UTCClara dropped the empty cardboard box onto the growing pile by the door. Her muscles ached from a full day of hauling belongings up three flights of creaky stairs. The late afternoon sun slanted through dusty windows, painting long shadows across the scuffed hardwood floor.
She turned in a slow circle, taking in her new home - all 500 square feet of it. The wallpaper peeled at the corners, revealing patches of yellowed plaster underneath. A water stain spread like a dark cloud across one ceiling corner.
"Well, it's not much, but it's mine." Her voice fell flat in the empty space. No response came except the distant hum of traffic and the building's ancient radiator clanking to life.
The shadows lengthened as the sun dipped lower, distorting the proportions of the room. The walls seemed to lean inward, making the already small space feel even more confining. Clara wrapped her arms around herself, suddenly aware of how quiet it was without her old roommate's constant chatter and Netflix marathons playing in the background.
She'd wanted independence - craved it even. But standing alone in the growing darkness, surrounded by towers of boxes labeled in her own handwriting, the reality of her situation hit hard. No more impromptu movie nights. No more sharing midnight snacks or borrowing clothes. Just her, in this tired old apartment that smelled faintly of mothballs and someone else's cooking.
A car horn blared from the street below, making her jump. Clara hurried to flip on the overhead light, chasing away the worst of the shadows. The bare bulb cast a harsh glare that somehow made the space feel even more foreign and unwelcoming.
Clara collapsed onto her unmade bed, the only piece of furniture she'd managed to set up. Her phone's screen illuminated her face as she pulled up her current e-book - a cheesy romance novel that helped take her mind off the move.
The first scratch was so faint she almost missed it. A whisper against the wall behind her head, like fingernails dragging across drywall. She lowered her phone, head tilted.
Nothing.
She'd almost convinced herself she'd imagined it when the sound came again. A deliberate scraping noise, moving in short bursts. Clara pressed her palm flat against the wall, feeling for vibrations.
The scratching stopped.
"Just the building settling," she muttered, but her voice sounded thin and uncertain in the quiet room.
She tried to focus on her book again, but the words blurred together as she found herself straining to listen. The noise returned, more insistent this way. It seemed to track a path upward, following the wall's height.
Clara sat up, pulling her legs onto the bed. The sound was clearer now - a distinct scratching pattern that couldn't be explained away by old pipes or shifting foundations. Whatever made the noise moved with purpose, trailing along the wall's surface like something testing for weak points.
Her breath caught as the scratching paused directly behind her headboard. The silence stretched, heavy with anticipation. Then came three sharp scrapes in quick succession, as if something on the other side knew exactly where she sat.
Clara swung her legs off the bed, her sock-covered feet silent against the floor. Her hand trembled slightly as she reached for the wall switch, flooding the room with harsh fluorescent light. The shadows retreated to the corners, but the unsettling feeling remained.
She approached the wall where the scratching had been, each step measured and careful. The old floorboards creaked beneath her weight despite her attempts at stealth. Up close, the faded wallpaper showed its age - small tears and water damage marking its surface.
"This is ridiculous," she whispered, but still pressed her ear against the cool surface. The wall felt solid against her skin, its texture rough through her thin t-shirt. She held her breath, straining to catch any sound.
Nothing.
The abrupt silence hit her harder than any noise could have. Her pulse quickened, blood rushing in her ears as she waited. The usual sounds of the building - creaking pipes, distant voices, the hum of the radiator - all seemed to fade away, leaving her in a bubble of absolute quiet.
Clara pulled back from the wall, running her fingers through her hair. "Get it together. Old buildings make weird noises." But even as she said it, goosebumps raised along her arms. Something about that scratching had seemed deliberate, almost intelligent in its pattern.
She scanned the wall's surface, looking for any signs of damage or movement. The wallpaper remained still, its floral pattern faded but intact. No holes, no cracks, nothing to suggest what might have caused those sounds.
Standing there in the harsh light, Clara felt foolish. Yet she couldn't shake the feeling that she should be worried - that those sounds meant something more than just settling pipes or scurrying mice.
Clara turned away from the wall, ready to chalk up the strange sounds to an overactive imagination. Three steps toward her bed, she froze. Something shifted in her peripheral vision - a flicker of movement from the hallway visible through her open door.
She pivoted slowly, facing the narrow corridor. The overhead bulb cast weak light that barely reached the shadows pooling at the edges. Those dark patches writhed and twisted in ways that defied logic, flowing like oil against the peeling wallpaper.
"It's just tired eyes," she muttered, but couldn't look away. The shadows undulated, stretching and contracting with fluid grace. They seemed to reach toward her doorway before retreating, only to surge forward again in a hypnotic dance.
Clara's fingers curled into fists at her sides. The rational part of her brain insisted shadows didn't move like that - couldn't move like that. Yet these shadows swayed and rippled as if alive, their edges too sharp and defined to be natural.
She squinted, trying to find some logical explanation. Maybe headlights from passing cars? But the window at the hall's end showed only darkness. The building's ancient wiring? But the overhead bulb burned steady, without even a flicker.
The shadows continued their silent performance, sliding along the walls like curious fingers testing boundaries. They seemed almost playful in their movement, advancing and retreating in an endless game of cat and mouse.
Clara's throat went dry as one particularly bold shadow stretched toward her doorframe, its edges curling like smoke before snapping back into the darkness. The motion looked deliberate - teasing even - as if inviting her to step closer for a better look.
She remained rooted in place, heart hammering against her ribs as the shadows continued their impossible dance.
The scratching returned with renewed intensity, each scrape against the wall sending vibrations through Clara's mattress. Her fingers clutched the comforter, pulling it tight against her chest as she pressed back against the headboard.
The sound tracked along the wall's surface, no longer trying to be subtle. It moved with purpose, creating patterns that almost felt like words - if words could be carved into plaster with desperate claws.
"Hello?" Her voice cracked.
The scratching paused. In the silence that followed, a low whisper drifted through the wall - too quiet to make out words, but carrying enough menace to make her skin crawl. The sound was guttural, more animal than human, yet held a terrible intelligence in its cadence.
Clara's eyes darted to each corner of her room, searching the shadows for movement. The overhead light cast harsh angles, creating pockets of darkness that seemed to shift and writhe when she wasn't looking directly at them. Her gaze jumped from her closet to the space under her desk, then to the gap beneath her door - anywhere something could hide just out of sight.
The whispers grew more insistent, a wet rasp that made her think of teeth and tongues and things that lived in dark places. The scratching resumed, matching the rhythm of the voice - scratch, whisper, scratch, whisper - building to a frenzied crescendo that had Clara pulling the covers up to her chin.
She wanted to run, to bolt from the room and never look back. But that would mean facing whatever waited in the shadows of the hallway. At least in here, she could see most of the room. At least in here, she knew where the sounds were coming from.
The whispers changed pitch, becoming almost melodic in their horror. Clara pressed her hands over her ears, but it did nothing to block out the sound that seemed to bypass her ears entirely and slither directly into her brain.
Clara's eyes burned from exhaustion as she huddled against her headboard, the harsh overhead light her only defense against the encroaching shadows. Her phone showed 2:47 AM, but sleep felt like a distant impossibility. Every time her eyelids drooped, another whisper or scratch would jolt her back to alertness.
The wall behind her had gone quiet an hour ago, but the silence felt expectant - like something waiting for her to let down her guard. She'd considered calling her old roommate or even her parents, but what would she say? That her new place was haunted? That shadows moved in ways they shouldn't?
Her muscles ached from holding the same tense position. The rational part of her brain argued that she needed rest, that everything would look less frightening in the daylight. Her chin dipped toward her chest as exhaustion won another small battle.
Just five minutes, she thought. Just rest my eyes for...
THUD.
The impact against the wall was so violent it rattled her teeth. Clara launched forward, scrambling to the foot of her bed as dust rained down from the impact point. The sound had come from inside the wall itself, as if something massive had thrown itself against the other side.
Her heart thundered in her chest as she stared at the wallpaper, watching it ripple and settle. The impact point bulged slightly outward, creating a distortion in the faded floral pattern.
A piercing whistle cut through the air, starting low and rising to an unnatural pitch that made Clara's teeth ache. The sound twisted and warped, mimicking a melody that felt wrong on a fundamental level - like someone trying to recreate music without ever having heard it before.
The scratching resumed its frenzied pace, synchronized with the whistling in a horrific duet. The wall vibrated with each new impact, small pieces of plaster breaking free and scattering across her bed.
THUD. Scratch-scratch-scratch. The whistle rose higher.
THUD. More scratching. The whistle became almost playful, a mocking tune that bore no resemblance to any song Clara had ever heard.
She pressed herself against the far wall, as far from the noise as possible in the small room. The whistling changed again, becoming something between a child's nursery rhyme and a funeral dirge. It echoed strangely, seeming to come from multiple points within the wall at once.
The shadows in the corners of her room pulsed in time with the sound, expanding and contracting like a living thing taking slow, measured breaths. Each new thud against the wall made the overhead light flicker, momentarily plunging the room into darkness before snapping back to harsh fluorescence.
Clara's breath came in short gasps as she watched the wall bulge outward with each impact, the wallpaper stretching like skin over something pushing from the other side. The whistling grew more intense, its notes impossibly complex and layered - as if multiple voices were weaving together into a tapestry of sound that hurt to hear.
The wall pulsed one final time before a voice slithered through - not from behind the wall, but seeming to emanate from within it.
"Claraaaaaa..."
The sound was wrong - like multiple voices layered together, some high and reedy, others deep and wet. Her name stretched and distorted, becoming almost unrecognizable in its drawn-out syllables.
She flung herself away from the wall, stumbling over her own feet in her rush to reach the door. Her fingers had barely brushed the handle when it slammed shut with enough force to rattle the frame. Clara yanked at the doorknob, but it wouldn't budge. She threw her weight against the wood, but it felt like trying to move a concrete wall.
"No, no, no..." She rattled the handle again, panic rising in her throat as she realized something on the other side was holding it shut. The wood felt ice-cold beneath her palms.
A thunderous bang erupted from within the walls, followed by another, then another. The impacts came from all directions - behind the drywall, above the ceiling, below the floorboards. Each hit made the room shudder, sending small cascades of plaster dust raining down.
The cacophony built to a deafening crescendo before cutting off abruptly. In the sudden silence, a laugh bubbled up from somewhere deep within the walls. The sound was guttural and wet, like something trying to remember how to be human and getting it horribly wrong. It rose and fell in unnatural patterns, filling the room with its horrible mirth.
Clara pressed her back against the door, hands clasped over her ears, but she couldn't block out the sound. The laugh seemed to bypass her ears entirely, reverberating inside her skull with increasing intensity.
Through the plaster, a small hole appeared, crumbling outward as if something had punched through from the other side. Clara's breath caught in her throat as she watched dark fragments scatter across her bedsheets. The hole was perfectly round, about the size of a quarter, and seemed to absorb the harsh overhead light rather than reflect it.
Then she saw it.
An eye pressed against the opening - deep crimson with a vertical pupil that contracted as it focused on her. The iris was marred by strange patterns, like fractals or ancient symbols that shifted and changed as she stared. It blinked, the movement deliberate and slow, a milky membrane sliding sideways across the blood-red surface.
Clara's scream tore through the room, raw and primal. The sound of her own terror seemed to bounce off the walls, amplifying until it filled every corner of the space. The eye blinked again, almost lazily, before vanishing into the darkness beyond the wall.
The silence that followed was absolute - no scratching, no whispers, no impossible laughter. Clara's ragged breathing was the only sound in the room as she pressed herself harder against the door, her nails digging into the wood.
The handle behind her began to turn, metal scraping against metal with agonizing slowness…
Comments
Alee
I hope that this is the first of many. As much as I love your erotica, I knew for sure that you were capable of so much more.
Alee
Thank you, Thank you, Thank you. I'm very grateful for this.
Tibby
That is exceptional writing, Goddess! It’s left me feeling very unsettled just as I should be going to sleep!
Nasty Nate
Well done Mommy! You did an excellent job of building the suspense, and you gave such a detailed description of the things happening in the room, it built such a great mental image. Thank you!
Gerda
Creepy as h*ck, which is let's face it actually a pretty creepy place!
Drake Breen
Oh. Oh I should not have read this my first night in a new and unfamiliar building! This was very different but it's also so well done, the steady building of suspense as each of Clara's attempted rationalisations fell away and the shadows steadily went wrong (the "THUMP" genuinely gave me the willies!) Really beautifully written, Goddess, and I honestly wasn't sure up until the end (I am *fairly* sure now, I think!) if it was straight horror or psychological horror - maybe it's both! (Plus at the risk of sounding massively pretentious, it had a similar creeping horror to Yellow Wallpaper, I thought?) I really liked it, I'm so glad you shared!
Martin
Check Discord lmao. It was so good!
Hob
Holy fuck, that was an amazing read. I don't read horror often but this was fantastic. This story is written so well I could feel Clara's fear as the threat loomed closer. Thank you so much for sharing this Mommy, it is outside what your stories usually are like but I absolutely loved this.
Sasha
Like it?
Martin
What a cliff hanger!
