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[Omen of the Witchblade] Chapter 65 – The Joy of Killing

🕑 Added 2025-01-07 02:01:03 +0000 UTC

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Just joined pareton. Mel's murderhobo arc was fun but soured by the motivation given to her by her dead friends. They were bland and forgettable. You might be leaning on them too much to push Mel forward. It is a little like building a house on rotten foundations. Even though we know Mel's reasoning in character, it lacks all emotional impact and taints her motivations based on it.


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