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LTW[R] B3 Clans and Snakes: Prologue: Invitation and Letter

🕑 Added 2022-12-18 10:55:47 +0000 UTC

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Lone Immortus

1. I don't know the exact amount of time, but was less than 5 months. The seal was 400 ish days long and he spent 4 months in Milindo and then about a year in the Farwinds. 2. I'm not 100% sure on what my plans for Ardus are, but I have some ideas. Nothing asspully. 3. Thanks! I didn't want to spoil anything about what's gonna go on in this volume, but I did want to set some things up and make the time skip natural, which I'm happy I did.

Lone Immortus

Yeah, it was, huh? Lot of work to be done to restore their relationship.

Andrew Fox

I'm glad he's actually going to support his sister. Their first meet-up was kinda rough.

Thank you for the chapter! A well-done time skip in my opinion. It flows cleanly and clearly shows its nature without being too jarring. Not that there's anything wrong about being clear of time passing but as a prologue, I think this fits really well. Even if I'm curious about the exact time passing as I can't remember how long he had left on his timer, only that four days were added last time. I guess I will see that next chapter. It seems Millindo is on its way back to its feet. Whether this will be something positive or negative only time (or you) will tell. However, that Lone's most hated person alive seems to be missing doesn't bode well. For Ardus. Honestly, I thought I remembered that he died when Lone did his whole escape spiel, but I guess not. I'm curious about if he will become a bigger antagonist or be more of a mark of growth for Lone when he butchers him in less than a second. An antagonist for the mind is just as good as a physical one. Gilbert's POV was a pretty nice change of pace. Especially how he casually mentions Lone, a way of mentioning you mostly see between people close to each other. The whole segment just felt like a father or other person responsible for someone being a little frustrated about their charge but still have that warm undertone. Old people and complaining always go hand in hand, if it's done naturally which you've certainly managed. Honestly a really good chapter overall. Anywho, that's it for me. Have a good one Lone, peace!


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