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LTW[R] B2: Chapter 47: Fight and Throwing

🕑 Added 2021-06-01 01:49:57 +0000 UTC

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Wow, I took my time replying to this. Sorry, haha. 1. Indeed, conflict is natural, it's how the conflict is resolved that really matters. Having none at all would be stale and unrealistic imo. 2. Sophie has had thoughts about not liking Breena much a handful of times thus far. It's been a side thing, nothing of major focus. Mostly to justify this scene. 3. Soph gets too embarrassed when he uses that skill on her, so she doesn't allow him to do it. Sophie has no such reservations... well, usually. 4. Fixed, thanks. c: Chapters coming soon, and sorry again for the super late response.

Thank you for the chapter! Trouble in paradise eh? Well, can't say I'm not happy about this. A relationship isn't all smooth sailing so it's nice to see Lone and Sophie have their differences and not being the "perfect couple TM". It's usually complicated enough in an ordinary pairing, Lone has two radically different people in one person. Well done on a conflict that felt both natural and necessary to make Lone's and Soph/ie's relationship become something more 3D. I don't know if I have forgotten or just didn't realise that Sophie had such a chip in her shoulder about Breena. I can see how her reasoning may be something a person like her might follow but was she always that hypocritical? Lone even mentions it when they're arguing, it's almost exactly the same situation that she and Lone were in earlier. Now, I don't know if this was due to Sophie's selfishness (understandable selfishness though, that's come from her need of survival. And now it's mostly focused on Lone and her together, that says something about her) or something else. For I have a feeling there's more to this. It wouldn't even surprise if the reason she's so upset is that she makes that connection on her situation by herself and unconsciously become afraid that she's being left behind for Breena. The mind isn't logical and someone like her who has suffered for so long often has deep scars for a long time. One thing I was a little confused about was why Lone couldn't level his massage mastery without Sophie? Couldn't he just do that on Soph? And while still on the topic of levelling, how does that unstable thing work? Does it get better with use? Time? Skill? It's probable you made that wage due to Lone not knowing either but I'm curious. Does it mean she's following the shounen standard of making the skill her own? Would be pretty funny if she suddenly starts speaking about the genius of hard work or "YOUTH!". Just don't give her a bowl-cut, the green jumpsuit I can handle but Breena at least deserves that have some respect left in her. I only found the singular error today, which is "and say he piece did she.". In it "he" should be "her" and "did" & "she" should switch places to something looking like this: "and say her piece she did". Possible a shorter comment today, no real reason, just didn't really find any more ideas to write about. Hope you have a good one Lone, peace!


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