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LTW[R] B2: Chapter 45: Darkness's Plans and Twisted

🕑 Added 2021-05-17 23:19:41 +0000 UTC

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Lone Immortus

Lmao, unlikely since he's a Djinn, not a Primal, but I doubt Lone would be very nice if they were ever to meet again.

Gavriel

That Djinn is so stupid πŸ˜†, is the ninth tail for him? 😜

Tae

Just a lil bit, or maybe I've just read enough stories that it made it easier.

Lone Immortus

1. Very fair, haha. 2. Djinn don't like being used for wishes, is the long and short of it. Perhaps we'll learn more in the future. 3. Well, Mental Destruction is weakened to those who are pretty resistant to magical or soul related damage. 4. No worries. c:

Lone Immortus

Was it that obvious? I thought I buried it well enough...

Thank you for the chapter! Darkness really is annoying. Not in the way that it's badly written and more like you want to punch it in the face kind of annoying. I like how you made Darkness trick Lone in a way that I honestly didn't expect in a way that seems consistent with how he has acted beforehand. I still don't like him though, annoying things should be by themselves or something like it and just annoy each other. It was inevitable that the Djinn would dislike Lone. I mean, I both get it and don't at the same time. He/She/It has probably been trapped for at least hundreds of years in whatever container he's in. At the same time that it's trapped it also had to use its own power seemingly exclusively for its warden. So that in of itself makes sense to me. Now the other part is probably just my personal differences with the Djinn. To always act like an arsehole doesn't seem like a fun way to live. Of course, it's also enslaved so... There may also be some special detail that I don't know yet that makes it more logical why it would act as it does. Like how time maybe stops for it between wishes and it has been forced from its perspective just do a new wish the moment the last one finishes. Anyways, the result was probably one of the better ones anyway, Lone has to collect all those blessings of primals after all. I'm gonna totally honest here, I have no clue what to write more of at the moment. I do feel like something more has to be added before this is finished. Here goes. Mental destruction was even able to hurt the settings equivalent to a god huh. I have a feeling that when the skill reached its peak it probably will be almost unchallenged on its lethal effectiveness. Like damn, hurt a primal at what, advanced? Can't exactly remember where it lies but it's impressive none the same. Didn't find any errors today, probably due to me being tired as heck and almost rush writing this before school starts. Still, sorry. That's it for me. Hope you have a good one Lone, peace!

Tae

GOTTA CATCH 'EM ALL PRIMAL GODS. I figured he was gonna be going after breena


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