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LTW[R] B2: Chapter 43: Old Resistance and Soup

🕑 Added 2021-05-03 09:41:49 +0000 UTC

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1. I think I should make him swear more. tbh. Lone's opinion on the matter is that no word is bad, really. It's the meaning that matters. I'll likely go into this more during the epub edit. 2. Lol, it's fine. 3. Darkness has a lot of reasons for what it's doing which shall be revealed soon... 4. Well, not all that farfetched. Very few skills level solely from use. There are loads of factors at play. 5. No worries. 6. With that kind of pace you should pick up writing yourself, haha. 7. No worries. I just have it as a rule that ten or less is spelt out, 11 or higher is numerical in form.

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Thank you for the chapter! I don't think I've seen a single swearword come from Lone's mouth for at least some chapters. This is a big contrast from how he started, has the torture changed even this for him? Or is it Breena being close to him and he doesn't want her to learn such words? (He was/is a teacher at heart still, great showing on that in this chapter). I must seriously apologize though, I saw my second comment from RR's grammar today, I want to die. I know my English isn't exactly perfect, especially not after school, but that was honestly embarrassing. Now, back to the chapter. Darkness is truly an asshole of the almost highest degree. He isn't at the top, that's where the racist torture guy is impaled. I mean seriously is he just a sadist for his own amusement? Seems, probable when saying that aloud actually. Total douche though. Wonder if that's his schtick, he needs to get his new host wishing for death and/or be willing to take over? You know, like with vampires and being let in. Probably because he's a douche though. A real piece of work. Full of "dark" humour and all. Seems like the type of person who creates chaos online and thinks that he's funny. Seems to be the type to unironically like r/darkumour and think it's funny, a real edge lord. You know that part with illusion resistance made me think. Does the intent behind an attack determine how much resistance experience you get? Like, with how Darkness consciously used his illusions offensively and Lone got a pile of them but something more passive towards Lone only get him the easiest one. It's like the aggressiveness behind something almost multiplies the amount of experience he gets with how tough the attack was. It wouldn't surprise if the system counts all spells as aggressive and so gets resistance there and how elements like fire always count as "aggressive" due to their state. Probably really farfetched but fun to think about. Didn't really find any errors today, the spirit must have fully disappeared from its possession of me. Sorry if this was a little shorter than usual. Had a society? test on economics today, wrote like 3500+ words in like 2,5 hours. I don't really know what the subject is called in English but it's about how our society works like politics, ideology, personal and "societal" economics etc. Maybe social studies fit but I'm not sure honestly. Also, while this may be a bit hypocritical of me when I used numbers just above but I wanted to clarify why I "corrected" the "30" you did on that rewrite chapter. Basically, our Swedish teacher has pointed that out to me enough times for me to do it automatically. Seriously excuse my ramblings today. Anyways, hope you have a good one Lone, peace!


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