RunFaps
Lone Immortus
Lone Immortus patreon

LTW[R] Book 2 Stronghold & Secrets: Chapter 18: Blown Kiss and Spare No Details

🕑 Added 2020-10-28 15:40:52 +0000 UTC

Comments

Lone Immortus

We have no confirmation thus far if it's a Primal or not beyond its own words. Shouldn't be long now until Lone and Breena grow closer, which is great for what I have planned, haha.

Thank you for the chapter! It seems the Joestar family technique still finds some use, marvellous. Well done on the deception part from Lone, it didn't feel forced and if you didn't have his thoughts of it afterwards you wouldn't even get it. Though this meeting with a new primal (was it or not?) gave me a feeling that in the end, he will at least meet every single one of the criminals and maybe, just maybe get those blessings. It's nice that Lone at least got some resistance out of the meeting though, and not just more existential crises, those aren't the nicest to have. I must commend you again though, for Breena, her anxiety feels realistic and just all about her screams "I'm anxious" in a good way. Lone is as good as usual. Didn't actually find any faults this time so I'm going directly to the end instead. Hope you have a good one, peace!


More Creators