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SIS Book 4 Chapter 75: Summons and Token Usage

🕑 Added 2020-10-26 08:48:44 +0000 UTC

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Both errors fixed, thank you. c: Hmm... I'll consider writing some of those in in the future. They do take some planning to be interesting. I'll certainly consider it though. The idea with the throne is for its name to change as Daz's status grows, haha.

Thank you for the chapter! I think Daz's throne needs a better name, "the iron and tungsten throne" doesn't really flow that well. I know that isn't the most important thing in the world, but it would be nice to have his citizenship making a nickname up as a sort of unofficial way to call it. I don't have much to say about his council, it seemed to overall flow well though. I was a little disappointed though that we didn't get to see some cases that he had to judge, for the part when his citizens interact with him are the best, at least for me. On a completely different topic, well done on the balance between stars of eternity and "upgrade tokens" of different kinds. Because it makes sense that if you want to keep that extremely important upgrade that needs to come on every part of the skill. Instead of simply needing a second one, you could just spend more "tokens", seems good to me. Grammar faults for today: "nodded them", "them"→"then"; "Astral Cystral", "Cystral" → "Crystal". Now, hope you have a good one Lone, peace!


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