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SIS Book 4 Chapter 73: Gag Order and Altros' New Letter

🕑 Added 2020-10-16 00:10:05 +0000 UTC

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Originally this chapter was just going to be the meeting but I figured that would be kinda boring. Like, one of these scenes that feel like the author wants to matter but just bore you in a story you're quite invested in. I'm glad I brushed over it. Yeah, it's a shame. She was trying so hard too. At least she got an Ember from her efforts though, eh? Yes, these are, in essence, items that can give you a Star of Eternity like the Muisca temple's altar can.

PS: Did those star of eternity have the skill to make something permanent like the temples?????

Thank you for the chapter! Well, while that gag-order easily can be misinterpreted to be a dick move I think that was a genuinely good decision. Not only due to the plentiful and great reasons you do, but more in line with the expression: give a man a fish and you feed him for a day; teach a man to fish and you feed him for a lifetime. Or something like that with merit-points. I also really like how you showed through multiple parts of the chapter, Daz character growth. Such as when he took (made?, called for? Idk) council about the points and his anger/irritation in the end which shows that his feelings are becoming more natural to him. Only sad thing this chapter is Crusher failing her goal, I'm going to be rooting for her next one, go Crusher~, an invisible reader of your world hopes you succeed! Didn't really fin any mistakes so, hope you have a good one, peace!


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