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LTW[R] Book 2 Stronghold & Secrets: Chapter 13: Poor Experience and Tales of A Demigod

🕑 Added 2020-10-04 19:20:59 +0000 UTC

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Lone Immortus

Edited the sentence, thank you. c: I'm glad you liked the chapter! It was a fun one to write since it fleshed out Four-twelve and also built on the world by introducing another type of demigod without needing anything tense to happen, haha. This chapter may also have laid out quite a bit of foreshadowing... Maybe... >~>

Thank you for the chapter! Damn Lone, you're on a roll today! Two chapters in one day are almost like Christmas coming early. Anyways, back to the chapter stuff. A real well-done chapter through and through. Of course, there was one thing I saw which was: "Thank you for not getting upset over Sophie for not killing them all.", where it would be better if you changed up the wording so you don't need to repeat yourself. Now having said that, let's get into the rest of the chapter, the good stuff. Amazing character interaction and backstory, both making Four-twelve more real and overall making everything flow by well. The litrpg part was well-timed and truly, I can't ever say anything negative about well-written rpg-parts. Also, that was an amazing name for the demi-god, which combined with the way you explained simply was amazing. I agree with Lone on this part, their world is both awesome and terrifyingly dangerous. Anywho, hope you have a good one, peace!


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