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A Step Too Far - Chapter 5

🕑 Added 2023-02-04 22:15:19 +0000 UTC

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horuvex

I have most of it drafted, but prefer to edit it before releasing it into the wild. There will indeed be some...reactions.

GaryL

Really looking forward to everyone's reactions to a newly resized teddy.

horuvex

Thanks! Hopefully this week sometime.

Syriusz03

jsm109

No worries! As a fellow gts writer I know exactly what that’s like. If anything it was a nice little Easter egg. Glad I could help. Thanks for the double update :)

horuvex

Thanks for catching that. I wrote in the Nexifem world for so long that it is hard to break out of it. Teddy is a different guy than Chad, even if his predicament is similar. I thought I had rooted out all those typos, but one obviously crept in at the last moment. Corrected now.

jsm109

Now we’re cooking with gas. Loved it, especially the Freudian slip of Chad instead of Teddy ;)

horuvex

This story has a bit of a faster pace than some others, but also plays out with some nice detail, as you pointed out. Thanks.

horuvex

Thanks!

stevebasic

Wow these ladies waste no time. Dude is fucked, I’d say. I loved the humiliation, and the imagery of the room as they all talked was richly crafted. Good work.

Jona

Very pleasant surprise to see chapter 5 so soon after 4. I thought both chapters were great and I'm looking forward to a little shrinking.


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